Twilight Is A Bitter Incel

Twilight is lonely and can't quite figure out what to do to attract a handsome stallion into her life. She sees happy ponies sharing love all around her and experiences a deep, painful confusion within in her heart that leads her down a dark road. Rainbow Dash tries to set her on the right path, but only Celestia knows if she can get through to her...

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Toon

Toon #1 · Oct 27th, 2020 · 3 · ·

That was...interesting?

Don't get me wrong, I knew this story was more to talk about the problem that most people have when trying to get relationships with inexperience and horrible social skills but It felt odd for Twilight, I mean with all the friendships lessons it seemed, off? I mean she would have a lot of experience with talking and making friends so it seemed it little off to imagine her as the character but I really like the message and how you played it, Not entirely seething with anger and hate but sort of trapped in this cycle of thinking like she definitely has gone through this before and I like how you still played with it and I do really think a lot more people should learn to avoid these thoughts because lets be honest, this is a extremely unhealthy way to think and approach people and or relationships as a whole.

Anyway really great work.

thatboi

thatboi #2 · Oct 27th, 2020 · · ·

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Yeah, this is definitely more of an AU Twilight that's been through a few off-screen character arcs to get her into this state. Glad you liked the story though. I feel like some people may have thought I was taking a jab at the character herself, which wasn't my intention when I wrote it.

Caddy Finz

Caddy Finz #3 · Oct 27th, 2020 · 1 · ·

I like it so far, it's very funny! and it's not entirely inaccurate to certain types of people who are so preoccupied with just getting laid just because they perceive that everyone else is doing it. Not gonna lie, when I was young and stupid, I wasn't far off. The dislikes are only from folks who haven't gotten past that funk here, I'll leave a like and balance it out a bit for ya

thatboi

thatboi #4 · Oct 27th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Eh whatever, I fun writing it and that's all that matters to me. Glad you saw something in it too.

Haters gonna hate~

Disconnect

Disconnect #5 · Oct 27th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Such a number of dislikes... So it seems we've got some incel bronies here.
Not to hate or be disrespectful, of course. But it seems that some can't take a bit of criticism or I guess I'd call it advice.

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #6 · Oct 28th, 2020 · 2 · ·

Okay. So, this wasn't half-bad. I don't think you could write a fic like this without it being somewhat out of character, but I could maybe see Season 1 Twilight, new to Ponyville and just figuring out this friendship stuff, maybe going down a bit of a spiral like this. I'm sad to say I know all the incel ideology and metrics and shit stated here.

This has to be my favorite bit:

“Twilight, relationships are a process of trust and emotional bonding, not hiding behind some weird barrier of being the dominant one all the freaking time and always being better than other ponies. It’s okay to put yourself out there and just be vulnerable. Nopony is really judging you that much. We’re all in the same position, after all.”

It takes a lot of strength to be vulnerable, though, because that means you can be hurt. It often feels better to be purposefully miserable than to be hurt.

Anyhoo, I'm faving this.