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This actually started out surprisingly good, more so then I'd been expecting for such a simple idea. But that just goes to show that a good writer can make a story out of anything.
But the moment Slayer leaves the forest it goes downhill. In particular the body switch at the end left me feeling disappointed with how contrived it was.
If I ever come across this story again in the future i'll give it another look. But I don't think I can give it a follow as is.
I hope this is updated soon, I like how you kept the Doom Slayer silent. This is very well done.
Personally I really like how you made the characters interact you should continue it
I would have gone with FlutterdDoom.