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AtomicClop
Because "fantasy erotica" sounds better than "cartoon horse porn."
AtomicClop
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Good points: Great humor and light-heartedness present in this story. I enjoy tales like these that show themselves for what they are: unapologetic, fun, entertaining clop. It doesn't need an excess of fetish content or scenarios to appeal; the appeal is in the simplicity itself. The parts using Angel were very fitting; I felt like there was a touch of Emperor's New Groove in the cymbals bit.
Critique points: I feel this one was a little bit quick and sparse on a few details I like seeing. The pacing of the story works for the purpose, but I feel like a few more descriptions could maybe have helped to bolster the erotica a bit more, like to basically better illustrate the picture for readers. We get the essence of it yes, no doubt there, but it's never bad to consider adding a bit extra.
All in all, great story! A credit to the vast pool of Fluttershy/Rarity and FFM stories.
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Thank you! Always appreciated!
Consensual deer sex? Oh yes, count me in. And loving sex at that.
10144026
Yay! Thank you. My catalogue, you'll notice, is all consensual, loving sex!
(I noticed that's a neglected niche around here.)
10144030
Oh yes, that is a horrible neglected thing round these parts.
Pretty good
Anything but dragon...Poor Spike.
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LOL right?
I wrote my "why not dragon x pony" on my main account:
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Thanks!
Pinkies ear and tail just twitched
Brilliant! We need more deer-on-mare action!
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Yay! Thank you!
Antlerrific!
And of course Angel's being a little jerk.
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-The kind of clopfic that doesn’t make much pretense about things, but it does quite a good job once it (very quickly) gets where it’s going.
-Could use a bit more afterglow time.
-This story really plows onward relentlessly -- no subtlety and no break in the pacing, but it does that well.
-Kind of odd that Sweetie Belle is jumping rope and it’s never explained why. It’s not as if that’s a thing she does often in the show.
-Angel Bunny giving her away was a fun touch.
-Very hot threesome action.
-Grammar was perfect other than:
"I've ever so sorry,"-I’m not sure why you keep accusing yourself of being vanilla-only. An interspecies threesome is hardly vanilla.
-Very nice having them switch around and letting Rarity taste Fluttershy on him.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 95/100
Allure: 29/100
Enticement: 60/100
Immersion: 82/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 355/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
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Thank you very much for the time and effort!
Also, typo fixed.
Seriously, I am going to have to downvote some of your stuff just so you don't think I am fangirling too much! I jest, o/c, but i don't want this to get weird.
I wonder where my Lord of Chaos is during the tryst? I ship Fluttercord really hard, but I enjoyed this tale anyway.
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Glad you enjoyed the stories!