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Ragnarok17


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The Intergalactic Empire known as Faust seek out to find the best warriors from different planets and forces them to complete in the Gladiator Games.

When Faust about to capture Twilight, Spike end up save her and got capture instead! Now, Spike must fight off against numerous Gladiators in order to gain his freedom or else he won’t be able to see Twilight and Mane 5 again.

This fanfic is inspired by Thor: Ragnarok (My personal favorite MCU movie) especially when Thor is on Sakaar and expects a lot of old music in the fanfic.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 20 )

My favorite part in Thor: Ragnarok was Thor seeing Hulk and smiling real big then shouting out to Loki as he points towards Hulk.

"I have to get off this planet." - Loki.

I look forward to reading this story and see how where it goes.

Interesting story so far, as for the next chapter it would be interesting to go back to Twilight & the others. That way at least they would get to know about all the crap Spike was going though till that point before he let himself be captured.

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Yeah, I would imagine Twilight took this the hardest after Spike let himself be captured in order to save her and others.

I do have a plan for Pinkie Pie doing breaking the fourth wall stuff since she’s only one out of Mane 6 to do gag stuff according to the creators.

What’s your favorite part of the story so far and what do you think of Faust City? I wanted the city to look very different from any place that Spike been to and make him feel out of place.

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My favorite part has to be Spike's interactions with his captors, although I'm hoping he can make some friends/allies in this place. Also Brutus kinda reminds me of Frank from MIB tv series, only less sophisticated! :rainbowlaugh:

As for the city I like the look you have given it here, kinda Blade Runner/Fifth Element vibe, looking forward to see what else comes up next! :moustache:

Grammar needs a lot of work mate

Keep up the good work, can't wait to see more chapters

Comment posted by Slayer45jack deleted May 2nd, 2020

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in term of continuity, This story take place around Season 5.

So Starlight Glimmer is still enemies of the team and Spike haven’t meet or befriend both Ember and Thorax since those two characters debut in Season 6.

The first 5 seasons was not kind to Spike since those seasons focus on “Spike Abuse” and I feel Season 5 was the last one on that “Spike Abuse” before latter seasons treat Spike better.

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Oh okay that's my bad lol ok well keep up the great work

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Well that's really FRICKIN MESS UP AND BULLSHIT to put in a Kids Show!!!!!! WHAT THE HECK was Hasbro THINKING!!!!!!!!!

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Apparently a number of the writers have admitted to not liking Spike very much. Their reasons range from not knowing what to do with him to preferring to focus on other characters. Given his Designated Monkey status, it's no surprise that someone working on the show felt this way about him.

Jim Miller admittedly they went too far on “Spike Abuse” after the negative reaction to “Princess Spike” and that’s why latter seasons treat Spike better after Season 5.

That’s why I chose this story to take place around Season 5 since it was the last season that focus too much on “Spike Abuse”.

I guess Fimfic writers treat Spike better in their stories than any official MLP writers.

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HECK YEAH!!! He even have the Main Six, the Princesses, and more be in his "Horde". 😏😏 :raritystarry: :rainbowwild: :heart:

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You mean those Harem story? I love Highschool Dragon story BTW.

Yup, Spike is one lucky dragon! He made all stallions jealous by having Main Six, Princesses and all beautiful pony as his harem!

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TF2 Medic: YYYYYYEEEEEESSSS!!!!!! Wildcard25!!!!!!! 👍👍👍👍

“HEY READERS! ENOUGH WITH MANY OF A CANTERLOT WEDDING FANFIC ALREADY! LET IT GO! MOVE ON! WE GET IT! WE REGRET OF ABANDONING TWILIGHT! WE SAY WE SORRY TO HER! NOW, WRITE SOMETHING DIFFERENT CAUSE I GETTING TIRED OF GOING THROUGH SO MANY OF A CANTERLOT WEDDING FANFIC! TAKE YOUR ANGRY ON WHOEVER WROTES THAT EPISODE!” Pinkie Pie sat down on her throne angrily.

What if a story I'm writing will involve that episode?

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Sooooo…… are you going to continue this story at some point?

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Depends.

I still thinking about whether or not to continue the story or rework the story.

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Well if you do continue it or rework it, I was wondering maybe you could do a sequel that takes place after The Ending of the End? Oh and if you maybe make Spike grow in height so he can be as tall as Smolder?

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