• Member Since 25th Nov, 2013
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keithsterling


I started writing went I started college, I continued writing then.

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Welcome to the land of equestria inhabit by multi-colored equines morphs of five types Unicorns, Pegasus, earth ponies, gem ponies and Alicorns. my name is Justice Silverlight I am a dark blue colored unicorn stallion morph Royal investigator for Equestria. Up to about a year ago I was the proud Princess's protector of this land’s ruler one Princess Celestia. During my time in the service of Princess Celestia I not only call her my Princess, but she was my secret lover.

The land of equestria has live in peace and safety under rule of Princess Celestia and her sister Princess Luna for years, now with growth of more ponies and more towns a small dark element started to creep into the land that element is crime. A new word to be speaking in equestrian crime was unheard of in Equestria for hundreds of years, till mysterious unicorn mare kidnapped Applejack little sister apple bloom and follow up that kidnapping by kidnapping Scootaloo a close friend of Rainbow dash. It forced the two element holders to pay the kidnapper to get back apple bloom and scootaloo. After writing a report to Princess Celestia about the two kidnapping Princess Twilight sparkle request a royal investigator to come to ponyville to look into the kidnapping. Princess Celestia sent Royal investigator Justice Silverlight her once loyal solar guard commander and secret boyfriend. After awful misjudgment on the part of Princess Celestia her relationship with Justice Silverlight fell apart, causing heartbreak in the demigoddess of Equestria.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 6 )

..................................SIGHS!! :facehoof:

You have a good idea but you ruined it with this one chapter.
It's so...bleh. I mean what the heck happened? There a small argument then he framed and she regrets it? But ti done so dam fast and such small details it feels super lazy and not to be taken seriously.

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Oh well can’t please everyone.
Thank for comments anyway.

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