Interesting story so far, I hope this will grow to a more plot driven story.

Story has potential as far as pretty-much-only-clop fics go, but it's in desperate need of an editor. Lot of problems with grammar, spelling, sentence structure et cetera.

more!!

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

I'm a little confused. Is this story complete but mislabeled or what cause I see the sequel labled as complete.

Abandoned