• Published 8th Aug 2019
  • 2,620 Views, 8 Comments

On Butterfly Wings - Snow Quill



After a stressful day of spell given wings, a competition and a rainboom, Rainbow Dash and Rarity visit their private dungeon for punishment, apologies, and a mended relationship.

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Comments ( 8 )

Adorable! I've been so excited for this story!

I enjoyed reading this.

I was hoping that Rarity was going to have butterfly wings during the story.

9772734
Heh, sorry. I didn’t really think about that when titling and stuff. Hope you still enjoyed it though

This needs a sequel

Short, sweet, yet full of personality, from Rarity's loving generosity to Rainbow's more vulnerable side, a brevity stretched with emotion and character. I loved every moment.

Especially that bit where Rarity tasted the Rainbow.

My only criticism is that while you managed to contain so much in so little, the potential of this shipping in this universe feels deserving of much more. I would urge both you and Manifest to correct this. Pretty please. With cherries.

Pretty good. But why is Rainbow calling her mom :trixieshiftright:

9784494
Because Rarity as a mommy-dom is awesome

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