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Seraphem


Writer of kinky horse words, and less kinky comments that can be longer than some entire fics.

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After two years... our salvation has been delivered! We have reached true enlightenment!

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:twilightsheepish:

Thanks. Sorry this took so long to get started.

I love some of your stories

Congratulations on publishing this. I've been waiting. :twilightsmile:

Finally, some straight up play, everything I've ever wanted from this story! It feels like everything up to this point has been teasing and we finally have the payoff!

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Thanks you! Glad you enjoy it.


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Yes, but good build up just makes the fun that much more fun. And Luna has plenty of more fun to go.

This chapter has some of the elements I love most about CtS fics. For me, there's something beautiful and sweet about pre-scene conversations between doms and subs, where plans are made and boundaries are discussed.

I'm really glad we get to see more of Gregor. In the last story, you hinted that he was a sweet and caring dom outside of his roleplayed persona, and I really enjoyed reading more of him here.

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Thank you very much, and agree, one of the best parts I love most about CTS is the scene setting, the little breaks from the action that make clear that this is all just a big, fun, kinky game everyone is playing and reinforcing how much trust and caring underlying everything done, no matter how intense and kinky.

And glad you liked Gregor, I'm very glad he's been so well received, of course I had to bring him back and give him a bit more focus, just wait, things well get even better soon.

Жду продолжение!)

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Спасибо. Много веселья в магазине.
(And thank you Google Translate :twilightsheepish:)


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:twilightsmile: "Spike? What are you reading?"
:moustache: "Nothing! Don't come in here!"

This ia shaping up well to be good story. Slower to get in action than most, but with the ambitious scene setting, I can't complain.

Still hoping we get to see the scene with Cadence and Shining Armour at some point.

If not, oh well, this is great in and of itself.

Poor Luna. I wonder what event brought her fear of inhibitor rings... Still the story is very much enjoyable.

Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next!
I am wondering though how many of them suspect her real identity.

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That is on the list of one shots to get to... eventually...


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Well, she does give a time line for when she realized how much she dislikes them, and we know of at least one decently major bit of fun she had there.


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I will be trying to get more done faster, IRL kind of kicked my ass over the last few months, and yeah, seems her disguise might not be quite as secure as she thinks it is.

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Please do not rush it. I know very well how real life events can exhaust creativity.

Yeah, Luna falls for the classic trope of letting her disguise be too reminiscent of herself. Especially with her rather unique dialect. Anyone seeing Fading Crescent can't help but be reminded of their ruler, can they? With her colour scheme and general Moon theme. Cadence made a pretty good argument in one of the earlier stories for Heartthrob's appearance.

I wonder though if she truly messed up out of arrogance, or if what was hinted in the classroom scene wss true. That she really wasn't trying because she wanted ponies who knew her to see through the disguise.

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I'd say neither, it's just her personality is too distinctive for her to hide well. That and she needs to invest a few more skill points in bluff if she wants to pull something like this off.

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You'd think with how many points she has in intimidation she'd be a better bluffer. :raritywink:

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Eh, those two are very different skills. Plus Luna isn't the type to make threats she isn't entirely willing to follow through on.

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True, although mamy rp systems tend to clump them together under "charisma".

No she is not, she is an honest badass.

Amazing story! Also, I'm curious to see what we'll learn about Wood in the Aftercare chapter.

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