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16 years have passed since Martin, Alan and The Mane Six saved Equestria and all of creation from certain destruction. Martin & Applejack have raised their daughter Mary in the light of both worlds to be strong and honest. Mary loves her family dearly but always feels like she doesn't belong anywhere and lacks self confidence. But she has her friends, Scootaloo, Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, Dinky Hooves and Alan's brash yet fun loving son Dominic backing her up whenever she needs them. But a new enemy surfaces beyond the borders of Celestia's kingdom which could plunge Equestria and the mysterious Waste's into an all out war.

WILL THESE NEW HEROES SAVE THE DAY?

WILL EQUESTRIA FALL INTO WAR?

AND WHO IS THE BLACK KING, RULER OF THE WASTES?

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 44 )

I want to know what happened on the porch last Christmas!!!!

And I want to know NOW!!!!!!!!

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It involved spiked egg nog and a quilt, Dash threatend to kick my ass if i said anymore.:pinkiecrazy:

well i'm glade you found somthing new.. its lookin good too :ajsmug:

Dominic and Scoots disappearing huh??? Crusader trebuchet?? Yep it's all fine!!!! There will be no shenanigans of any sort!!!!!

I want just want to gave Mary a hug now!! By the way, how do the kids feel about the fact their mothers natural
forms are, in fact, magical talking ponies from another world???

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Over the years, they have gotten used to it.

1695350 Well, I suppose 17 years is enough time to get used to it....

And now I have more questions!! Sorry...:twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:
How did they fair though out school, having a year on Equestria, and a year on Earth??
Did they ever have any other friends that they told about this??
What would happen if someone else were to find out, as I'm guessing Sortitus wiped every one's mind after Discord's "visit"??
What would happen if someone remembered??

To be honest, I'm not expecting answers, but these are the things left swirling round in my head that I feel need addressing.
But, as I say to everyone whose stories I read I might make a suggestion for, it's your story. Take it whatever direction you
wish to, it certainly won't diminish as a pretty damn awesome series!!!

Well.....fuck. This doesn't sound good!!

I am excite, a new adventure in my favorite story! WOO!

“Balls!”

I'd have gone with "Well......fuck!"

So who is the mysterious enemy, and what did they do to him??

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Well you see that would be telling

1843669 Having read the previous stories in almost one go, I feel that I should know who it is!!!

Trixie............the hero?????

Yes! All of my yes!!

On a side note, dammit people, stop updating whilst I am at work!!
It' s hard to read on my phone!! :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2:

Mary was engulfed in an aura of blue and white flames

And the next time she does it, she gets a aura of yellow flames with electricity cackling around, her hair turns blonde and her eyes green.
"Super Saiyan unlocked!!!"

Sombra?? It is the only one I can think of!!

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You might be right, or you might be wrong. I shall confirm neither:pinkiehappy:

2142375 naaah, Sombra doesn't talk. Even Gak got more time than him. :trollestia:

Ooooh, that had to hurt!!!!

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i like sombra, he is in my story and the reason i like him is because he isnt a solid character and you can take him, and make him into whatever you want, you have to follow strict things for the mane 6 and everypony else, even if people dont do that for celestia and luna....BUT anyway you can make sombra into anything you want, you can make him talk more then just crystalssssss, before he was destroyed by the crystal heart, and he was in his body form, he did say a couple sentences, so that shows he can talk when he is fully ponyish, thats what i love about him

So it is Sombra then? And I hope Dom is going to be all right.

Is it......damn, forgot her name. Lupe, was it?

Of course thinks where it got weird, and waking up with a pony version of you isn't weird at all....

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Ah, rule 34.2: There are ponies of it, no exceptions. Also,
BUCK YEAH MARY!!!

Epic end for the epic ponies/humans/human-pony hybrid freaks. (That last one's a joke btw!)

And was epically read from the flight deck of a C130.

“Stand down Mr. Washington"

Huh... why did I meantally replace Mr with Agent? I've been watching toooo much Red Verses Blue

2142375 Indeed.. or.. it might be an amalgamation, of sombras powers/memoys.. and someone/thing else..

Well, i'm very interested now.

I'm loving Dominic and Scoots.

I liked the El Dorado reference.

Good. A reformed Trixie. I like it.

Absolutley loved this story. It has received the David Crespo stamp of approval.

I read the whole story every stories with martin and co until this one it was awesome

Allow me to says this:
I know what a good author looks like you're gonna go far keep uploading good stuff.

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