You couldn't shake the tears. Twilight was with you. You didn't want make it her problem but, she offers you the best kind of magic. A simply sign of affection.
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What a sweet little story. (Needs a little editing
) never underestimate the power of a simple, kind gesture.
I hope things only get better for you.
God bless!
The touch of writing at the end should be an authors note rather than in the story.
It gets better, my friend.
Decent little piece of writing. Keep it up. Happy it helped you.
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Thank you. The site said I had to have thousand words to post this so I just put that bit at the end. Thank you for your kind words.
Nice short, sweet story, and I know those days, and I've had a few the last couple months.
It's not much, but have a like and a fave, and hope it helps, because this story deserves it anyway.
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I am sorry friend. ;w; I was having big sad today.
I hope things get better to you. Life is way more happier if you change things around your enviroment, more so if you have a life purpose. But that's my advice. Of course I would love to have Twi with me for her to see me succeed one day!
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This is one of the most heartwarming stories I'd ever read off this site. Nice job.
Although it's interesting that, in order to reach that 1000 word count to post this story, you not only added that author's note at the end, but you also wrote this whole paragraph twice in a row:
"Through the haze of your tears, the purple mare walked up to you. You barely peek out from the cover of your arms. The expression on her face held worry. You tried to wipe the tears away, trying to suck it up because that's what men did. You always just ended up letting more out. Everything hurt…you wanted it to end. You didn't want her seeing you like this."
But nonetheless, this is nice.