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BasedRainbowz


If you're looking for second person stories which mainly revolve around Rainbow Dash, I can certainly whelm.

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As a member of the weather team, Rainbow Dash always knows when the best days will be, and she made sure this would be a perfect one. The beginning of each month was always the best. She'd been putting this off for too long, but April 1st is the day Rainbow finally tells Anon how she feels about him.

He'll understand, right?
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This is my first attempt at fanfiction based on a very short story idea I had a little while ago. Any advice and feedback would be much appreciated. Also, yes, I slightly missed April Fools Day.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )
DumbDog
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Good first story. Upvote from me :twilightsmile:

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Gaspers!

If this is good enough for chapped, It's good enough for me to read.

Away with you, soft core risque pony fiction!

~Tosses her fanfic into a fireplace~.~

Now time to read in peace.

Had fun reading this!

Love the flow of the story, it was a great first tale!

I'm following now! Will want to see what ese you come up with!

Welcome to the site and great debut fic!:twilightsmile:

ATTENTION EVERYPONY!! This story is cute. That is all!

Too cheesy, too cuuuute

Good quality and quite uplifting you say 1st story keep up the good work. :moustache:

Thanks for all of the nice comments, I didn't expect this story to go down so well!

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Thanks, second person is a niche of mine, both reading and writing so I thought I'd give it a go for a debut fic. Maybe I'll branch out into other types, maybe even female second person, who knows? Glad you thought the quality was good, I spent far too long fussing over small details within the writing, good to know it paid off.

That story was just as cute as that adorable image for the title :twilightblush:

Nice, fluffy little story. Thanks for creating and sharing.

very interesting story, good work, let there be more such stories:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:👍👌

Yes,very good

Dude, if Rainbow dash admitted to falling for me, that would be the best day of my life!

It’s adorable and very sweet i give it 100/10 Provo congratulations and continue with the amazing work

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