Twilight gets a Puppy
Season 3
By TDR
Apple family Rheita
Chapter 2
[Sweet Apple Acres ]
Applejack rubbed her chin with a hoof as she pondered. There was a lot to go over with this. The quilt, the fritters, the events, everything. She ignored the squee of Twilight as Granny got to the pictures of Big Mac as a foal, she had seen Granny heading in that direction after the first few pages.
Clearly so had Big Mac given how quickly he made himself scarce.
Granny was in high spirits with the only down side being the lack of a response from her half sister that was supposed to live in Canterlot. Granny hadn't seen her since she was a foal and went to school in the city.
Applejack wanted to find her for Granny, but Granny told her not to bother she didn't expect the mare was still alive at this point.
Still even ignoring that there were a whole mess of cooking supplies, quilting supplies and materials she would need to collect. Just the set up alone would take a few days and the first of the family would start trickling in a few days before the event. Heck the first few would be here by the end of the week.
Looks like Twilight would get her checklists.
Twilight smiled as she looked over the images. listening to the stories that Granny told about each of them. She didn't just focus on Big Mac, but there were plenty of tales about him.
What Twilight noticed however was a pair of ponies that were in nearly every photo that Applejack and Big Mac were in. A pair of ponies that were ignored or quickly distracted from in Granny's stories.
Twilight remained silent about it because of how intently Granny was avoiding talking about them. Applebloom seemed a little more sullen as she pressed against Spike's good arm and Applejack had wandered away muttering to herself as they passed the first of those photos.
Twilight didn't need to have who they were explained, she and Rahs had already heard about what happened to her friends parents. While she wasn't on the best of terms with her own family she was at least better about it now than she had been. Between the wedding and everything else there wasn't a real reason to be mad at them. Until dad tried threatening Mac, or mom went on a grand foals rant again.
Still she wished there was something she could do for them, but at the very least she could make this the best reunion ever.
[ Crystal Empire]
Rahs couldn't hide a grin as he sat back in a chair and watched the three at the table. This was great, he had even gotten one of the palace servants to bring him some popcorn.
“Can you please stop flirting with my wife?” Shining Armor glowered as Cadence actually had a blush from some of the Changeling Queens suggestions.
“No promises, though I could flirt with you if you prefer stud.” Chrysalis grinned as Shining blushed and Cadence glowered.
“Chryssy......” Cadence grumbled.
“Right right fine. Look I came here to apologize for that whole wedding thing. None of it went according to plan really...” Chrysalis offered.
“Except where it did.” Shining pointed out.
“What?”Chrysalis raised an eyebrow.
“ After the wedding there was a convenient influx of new guards and ponies looking to live in Canterlot with no real backgrounds past a certain point. Most of the damage to the city was limited to public works with only Guards and nobility being targeted with anything more than simply keeping ponies in their houses. It was a terror tactic designed to get us to look the other way while you slip changelings into positions that could be taken advantage of. I've also broken down the new adjustments I some how know how to make to my shields. You taught me a very specific type of shield spell and added the suggestion while I was in that daze spell to use it to only affect changelings who were out of their disguise, not the race as a whole. I know how to do that now by the way, and it's been tested as hundred percent effective before we came up here.”
Chrysalis' eyes widened.
Cadence was clearly surprised as well.
“I sometimes forget he's related to Twilight.” Cadence smiled.
“Doesn't show it very often?” Chrysalis asked.
“No.”
“I'm right here you know.” Shining sighed as Rahs cackled.
“So I gather he's right?” Cadence sighed.
“Of course. I needed changelings in position to be able to work a vote to allow us a space in Equestria. Sunbutt's not going to allow it on her own and basically you and Princess Luna are the only ones I can work with without risking losing my head.” Chrysalis sighed. ”Of course you may have also given us another option with this empire thing, but I'm still leery going through with that until I find out more about that Crystal Heart of yours. It does me little good to try and move up here if our presence has any detrimental effects to it.”
“Why would I let you, let alone tell you anything about the heart? I'm still mad that you tried to steal away my husband, and you slept with him.” Cadence glowered.
“You weren't even married yet and it's not like I forced him to, he's the one who suggested it.” Chrysalis protested.
“Because he thought you were me.” Cadence snapped.
“I slept with you too and I don't hear him complaining about that?” Chrysalis offered.
Both the mares turned to look at Shining who had taken that moment to pretend to take a excessively long drink from his tea, and hoped to what ever god or universe writer that might be out there they would move on with the conversation soon.
Sadly the rabbit was not that generous.
“In my defense, I wasn't even born yet.” Shining finally offered when the stares continued far past the emptying of his tea.
“That's hardly a defense Shining Armor, I remember what you said at the wedding.” Cadence glared.
“Well that makes one of us. That whole bit was rather hazy.” Shining placated, rather glad Applejack wasn't here. His brothers hyena like cackling wasn't helping.
“See I broke his mind with my mad sex skills... I'm always doing things like that.” Chrysalis smirked.
“Please....” Cadence scoffed. “ You're not that great.”
“Don't give me that Cady I taught you everything you know.” Chrysalis grinned.” But I didn't teach you everything I know.”
“I've taken that teaching and expanded quite a bit on it over the years.” Cadence frowned. “The student is now the master.”
“Unless she has the collar on.” Shining added getting a blush from Cadence a grin from Chrysalis and a retching noise from Rahs. Shining smirked before he turned to yell at Rahs “That's what you get for listening in hair ball!”
“ Shining......” Cadence growled.
“Cadence. Stop. Do you know how often you've brought up Chrysalis in conversation since the wedding? A lot. It's pretty clear you've still got feelings for her in some shape or fashion. And given her …. hmm... about it.... what's the word?”
“Constant harassment?”Cadence sighed.
“Shameless flirting?” Chrysalis smiled.
“Blatant innuendo?”
“Insistence...” Shining glared at his brother.” She clearly still has a thing for you. So we need to work this out like the reasonable adults we are, sorry, are supposed to be.”
“Fine. Though I am married now Chryssy and you're going to have to respect that.” Cadence huffed.
“Fine, but you're also Empress, and Emperor of the Empire and those titles tend to come with concubines and stuff.” Chrysalis offered.
“You're willing to settle for being a concubine?” Shining blinked.
“I mean you studly.” Chrysalis grinned.
“Chryssy...” Cadence snapped.
“What!?! Just picture him in one of those transparent lace outfits they have in those Arabian books.” Chrysalis grinned wider.
Cadence blinked and looked over at Shining thoughtfully.
“I am not going to go out and get fitted for that sort of outfit....” Shining grumbled
“Why would you need to?” Chrysalis grinned. With a flash of green flame she turned into Shining Armor. Granted it was a Shining armor with some artistic liberties taken, and one who was dressed in flowing transparent silks with quite a bit of gold jewelry and even a few obvious piercings.
Shining Armor narrowed his eyes in annoyance and his horn lit up. His burn out was not completely recovered from, but he had more than enough power and skill to lift a napkin up to cover his wife's mouth as she drooled.
“Seriously?” Shining asked as he ignored Rahs who had fallen over onto the floor clutching his own eyes as he rolled about in dramatic anguish at the sight.
“What? This more to your liking?” Another flash of green flame and it was now Cadence in the same outfit with the same piercings and jewelry, as well as a fancier version of the aforementioned collar. .
Shining's mind stopped working, as his wife offered him a napkin for his own drool.
“Bork!” Rahs shouted snapping Shining Armor's mind out of the gutter.
“What do you mean get a room? This whole place is our room?!” Shining snapped at Rahs.
“Ahh breaking the place in are we?” Chrysalis smirked as she let the form she had flash back to her own.
“We still have the kitchen and a few hundred other rooms to break in. This is a big palace.” Cadence nodded.
Shameless queenbug... utterly shameless. That's why we love her.
*is dying of laughter*
I like this version better than the other version. Chrysalis I mean.
Spotted a couple things in need of correcting, I can list them if you'd like. Otherwise, this had me laughing a lot after the swap to the Empire.
Oh my, what a scandal!
...err, have you written a book about it? I'd rather buy one if you did.
Short chappie but like a dwarf very entertaining
i still wait for the queen to slip up and tell them about her and cadence daughter
and the real reason why sunbutt hate her,
oh and her daughter is crush on rah major......
also is it possable to hit the light button more then once, cause this is great
Oh now I have to start guessing who she may be
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Ditto
Something looks odd here... did you mean "...without risk of losing my head..." or something to that effect?
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Trixie's grandmother?
I am Rahs in this scene
Didn't see that one coming did you Chryssy
And that makes us smile with glee
Then get back to work
Oh my lol somehow this is better then the show I mean instead of a raving mad lunatic shes just has a crush and wats to help her people and seems to be in the middle of entering a open marriage with them both which in my opinion would be hilarious as twilight would have to plan a wedding and somehow stop sunburnt burning the place down
Chryssy is thinking good with the outfits but Shining is more of O&O, maybe a Cat eared, or another type of pony mystical race
With how she's acting I doubt she wants actual peace, she just doesn't want a war. Specifically one where she loses. So instead of diplomacy to decrease tensions to the point where changelings can openly enter equestria undisguised, she has them infiltrate the goverment to overturn it from the inside so changelings are free to do as they wish without repercussions because they control the goverment. And this is when she already had a friend who was one of the rulers of equestria. But with that not panning out, she waltzes up to people she's made an enemy of and says they are now "friends", all so she can betray them later. Also, planning to steal the Crystal Heart. I don't expect her to be able to think of something other than stealing it from the ponies so she can have it for herself.
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I'm assuming it's the Oranges
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It strikes me more along the lines of trying to make all issues between ponies and Changelings personal between herself and the pony leaders, so that she becomes the target of any issues rather than her people, since she's immortal as long as her people live.
...which oddly enough, strikes me as something she'd not only do but enjoy. How long would she be the political punching bag when she's throwing blatant innuendo at every blow?
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You know, at this point I'm certain you aren't even reading the story and are just twisting what characters say to fit your preconceived notions.
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*reads the complaints.*
i am starting to think, you are not actually reading these chapters beyond what you want them to say.
3 serperate times in three different chapters, once to herself and once with a lie detector she said she didn't want conflict and just wants a integration of her race. She CAN NOT even show the hint of a changeling to Celestia or they are dead, any favoritism is met with scorn at the least and a through investigation at worst. and Celestia's scorn can topple nobles or officials.
She has no plans to betray any one and her comment about the heart was followed by the comment of her moving her entire race to the empire if the heart can make enough love. Thus far aside from being annoying Chrysalis is playing it straight, but she has a fall back if all else fails and that fall back is keep hidden and try again in a few centuries.
Sounds like both Shining and Cadance know what to get for each other's Hearth-Warming/birthday/Heart&Hooves.
Oh my~ Also, does crystal corn exist?
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You clearly hate this story so why do you continue you comment every other chapter?
Bughorse is funny when she's lewd.
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I just find it very difficult to believe Chrysalis would actually have benevolent motives, given the character is known for being unashamedly evil. First off is her trying to conquer equestria, that's the opposite of peaceful. Sure she's more competent than in canon, but that doesn't make it less of a hostile act. And on top of that she went and betrayed the one alicorn who liked her. But despite this her walking in and saying she wants to be friends is genuine? It literally doesn't make sense to me. I may rather dislike Luna in this fic, but she does at least make sense. Chrysalis seems like a villian is telling everyone lies to their faces and they believe her.
On a slightly different note, I really hope you aren't actually going to have her insert herself into Cadance & Armor's marriage. Seeing as how she's gotten away with an act of war before, her being allowed to forcibly make them a threesome doesn't seem too far off.
...a peaceful solution that ends in a threesome?
....kinky. I approve
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Ah heh hem she is a changeling the Queen at that
and the goddess of change on top of that if anyone has the right to be able to "invade" "aggressively" and the flip flop over to peaceful negotiations it's the goddess of change and the queen of changelings who in all honesty has the second most right to do something that seems aggressive for peaceful wants and needs (the first one being discord
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Kudnapping, mind control, rape and invasion, then using said acts just so you can place infiltrators into key positions in a foreign government allowing you manipulate said government for as long as you like kinda trump telling the truth once, I'm afraid. Forgive me if I don't believe the highly-trained manipulator and deceiver.
i am not up to date with is story and i can easily say as of now this is the best of the three.
grate righting team.
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No one ever said she was easy to forgive. But she didnt use mind control in this. Mostly lies and a subtile weakening spell. Even her last spell was a daze and suppression. Rape....ehh thats perspective but in most courts yes though she just didnt say no when shiny suggested.
She is guilty of regicide though and quite proud of that despite celly getting better.
Grandparents, a perfect way to learn early of the duality and paradoxes of life. Both endlessly spoiling you, and endlessly embarrassing you.
An accurate picture of any Twilight
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Thank you for that, story
Velvet, you son is married to a literal Love Goddess, grandfoals will not be too long.
PFFFFFFFFFTTT!!!!!! Rahs.....you are awesome!
And Shining Armor is also epic. Yeah, he might have a more rounded build then Twi's 'Dump everything into INT' one, but he still gets that massive family bonus to INT, and since he's running a Paladin build more or less, he's got decent WIS.
The Changelings secret ultimate weapon! So, could this whole issue between her and Tia be helpped if things were set up so the two could just hate fuck each other for a few weeks?
Yes yes, they are kinky, in other news, Pinkie Pie is not quite normal.
Rahs?
I'm hearing Royal Threesome, anyone else?
The scene is fun enough as is, but adding Rahs just makes it so much more so.
And I am quite sure Chryssi will be more then willing to help break them in.
I'll admit, I do love the Cadance-Shiny-Chryssi art/stories, it would never work for canon, but in this 'verse, I could see them pulling it off.
Seriously, just make this a threesome and everyone gets what they want.
Cadance no longer has to choose between her loves.
Chrysalis gets Cady and has a solid in with Equestrian and Crystal Empire royalty.
And Little Shining gets shapeshifter booty.
That ending was fun.
Bug Waifu is a gooooo!
Damn... Shining is a busy stud...
......... So it didn't come out of left field!
Oh trust me, she is most definitely still alive!
Love this dynamic between chrysalis and cadance. Want more
Ok so they are thinking of fucking in every room in the crystal Castle to crisin them ......... Wink wink wink wink
Best Bugwaifu is best Waifu for a reason ♡
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A long standing Equestrian royal tradition
Best version of shining armor and Chrysalis ever fight me
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Oh I’m not gonna fight ya -
IMMA FIGHT WITH YA
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Ooh, lemme tag in!
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The shameless flirt and the guard who is over all this shit? Of course they're the best!
They are awesome together ♡