Twilight Gets a Puppy
Season 3
By TDR
Apple Family Rheita, Epilogue
[Crystal Empire]
Rahs stared at the statue of himself with a smile.
Damn he looked good.
This was the first chance he had to wander around and see the place. Despite the issue with the taste of her magic, he had stuck around to make sure Chrysalis stayed under control.
However now that the negotiations had gone in THAT direction he was done being a guard dog.
He actually planned to head back to Ponyville tomorrow, this had been a enjoyable trip, but he was greatly disappointed that the Empire didn't have any sort of theater left standing.
Of course he made the mistake of mentioning it and the crystal pony who over heard his brothers translation had run off with a gasp.
Next time he came back there was probably going to be a Theater with his name on it.
He rather liked that idea more than the statue to be honest.
Still he should mention that they needed to change his title. Not that he wanted a title any way.
Rahs sighed looking down at the plaque under his statue.
Trixie was going to kill the 'Great and Powerful' Rahs.
[ Crystal Empire]
“Are you certain?”
“Yes. It was one of the few that was salvaged. A number of these were used by the freedom fighters to increase their power, though after the unicorns were all...' put down' , there wasn't any more use for them.” the shop keep explained.” This one came into my possession not that long ago from some Crystal ponies looking to clean out the reminders of their former lives that remained in their homes.
“And you are certain it works?”
“Yep” The shop keep nodded. “Money back if it doesn't”
The hooded figure nodded, setting a bag of bits on the counter and grabbing the object in question as the shop keeper started counting the bits.
The necklace was a gray triangle with a red gem set in the center and a red eyed unicorn head emerging from the top. A pair of red gem encrusted wings spread out from the top as if the unicorn was winged as well.
The alicorn amulet.
Rumors of the necklaces power were everywhere, evidently some of the freedom fighters had found them to fight back against Solomon and Nightmare Moon before the crystal unicorns had gone extinct.
It seems the raid directly resulted in Solomon having all the unicorns killed off. With the power of the amulets they did a great deal of damage in their attempt , only the Witch Wolves proved to be beyond their ability to deal with.
Trixie Lulumoon smiled. With this power she would be stronger than Twilight and be able to pull Rahs away from her. The Diamond Dog and the god's child would hardly be able to compete with her when she had this.
Fuzzy would be hers.
[Everfree Forest.]
This would not do.
The place was far too protected.
Far to many of the pack had been destroyed becoming that much weaker as they sought to find new hosts.
It didn't let them. It devoured them drawing their power into itself and growing stronger and bigger.
The tower was there before him, close enough he could smell the power still lingering on it.
It would claim it.
And destroy everything in it's way.
[Crystal Empire]
“I HAVE A WHAT!?!?” Cadence screamed staring at Chrysalis.
The bug queen grinned and drew out a bit wallet, letting it unfold, showing a pink maned changeling as a little grub foal dressed up in a bunch of cute outfits.
“Isn't she adorable?” Chrysalis cooed.
“HOW!?” Cadence demanded.
“Well when a mommy alicorn and a mommy changeling decide to get their freak on, and the mommy alicorn decides to get a little more freaky and cast a spell to grow some parts that normally are only on stallions ….” Chrysalis began.
“And this is why I refused to let you do anything with that spell when I was a mare.” Shining nodded sagely.
“You can be a mare?” Chrysalis gasped.” I wanna see!”
“No” Shining Armor stated flatly.
We all know where this is going now
Also bonus points for Twiggles not being as oblivious was we expected.
And so, the little changeling manage to have a cousin of half-brother/sister that is not Flurry but come from Shining Armor... At the same time, does that mean that Flurry will get a big sis to play?
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Yes she would and the big sis get her wish Flurry would get a lot of nephew and nieces to play with as well
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Not quite. Changelings don't all have to breed with the queen Chryssy isn't the hives mother. Chryssy only has had maybe 3 kids only one is still around.
Nothing a little graffiti can't fix:
The Great and Powerful's Rahs
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Daawwww Flurry has a elder sibling. Can't wait for the day they met.
About time
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I'm getting confused... This is a daughter with Cadence and I don't think Chrissy could share her with another changeling so Chrissy must be the one that had her, unless changeling can share them very easy. And even if it was not with Chrissy, if it's still a crazy night seed that come from Cadence could still be considered the big sis...
And wait... Does that make her the heir to the throne of the Crystal Empire? ... Leaving that aside, it also give a big family with many cousins, nephew and more like Hiroblade say, right?
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No, she's not "legitimate". Out of wedlock and all.
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And this is what makes those thousand years villains that come in the future to bite your ass, literally... As the little changeling grow to be a Changeling Princess or Queen and come to the Crystal Empire to take what is her for rule, even if she need to take it by force from her little sister that everyone love, Flurry Heart.
And so she did... Flurry called her the day before telling her she was in need of a new throne and because she knew how many good memories she and her sister had, and the many times they played with each other ass (something they learned from Mommy Cadence and Mommy Chrissy girls nights) she decided to give her the old throne after replacing it and remember her that she will come for her niece #38.455 birthday party
so freak funny,
now Chryssy need to drop the bomb that her's daughter is after Rah's heart and what in his pants.....
9794859 To put it bluntly. Cadence grew a dick and porked Chryssy in one of their bedroom games. Chryssy got knocked up and hid her daughter from cadence while she was staying with the changeling murderer, celestia.
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And that don't make the 'daughter' (at this rate you should think a name as she is becoming more popular) the big sister of Flurry Heart and give her a changeling family?
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Her name is Saturnia.
Wait soooooo anyone else thinking twilights gonna flip knowing bu technicality shes a changling aunt now also omg aodrable also darn it I owe discord ten bits on fluttershy winning the bet
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Dun dun DUN!! So Cadance's daughter is trying to date her husband's brother? Woof!
looks like trixie is still going to go a little bit crazy but for different reasons, this should prove amusing
And here I was thinking we managed to dodge the bullet on that stupid amulet.
Lol.
At least this Trixie does it in the name of Love. Cadance would approve and pardon this course of action.
Lol.
Wait... does this mean saturnia has a crush on her step-uncle?
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By marriage yes
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Yeah, her step-uncle
Dammit Trixie, I had bits on you not get that in this story.
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The Great and Pawerful Rahs
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So... this makes me have a question.
In the world you've made if a god and a mortal have a child the child is a Demigod, but if a God and a God have a child is it a full god? And if it is, what is it a god of?
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Ahhh thats the question isnt it.
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Why yes, it is. And yet it is a question that you are unlikely to answer until it comes up in the story.
I eagerly await the chapter of which it comes up.
Love Chrysalis, Shiny, and Cadence here. Looks like there's going to be a lot more lovebugs up in the Empire before long.
Trixie's going to be a very different beast this time. I suspect the Amulet is going to force Saturnia to amp up the power she's using...quite possibly revealing herself to Ponyville in the process. Rahs is going to have a very difficult few days/weeks.
Also highly amused at how nonchalant Applejack and Twilight are about the likelihood of a couple Apple relatives being lovebugs.
When I think of this chrysalis I think if her mane as more disheveled than lank and oily
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She been named for a while. The changing in ponyville that wants Rahs.
Oh these last few chapter have been hilarious.
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Kumquats.
What? Somepony has to be the god of kumquats, after all...
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There is.
The Goddess of Fruit is a Hippo named Daquri who lives in the tropical belt of Equss. She and Rhino share mixed drink recipes.
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Wait... So, legaly speaking, she's trying to seduce her uncle?
Edit: nevermind, read the rest of the comments.
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You're not wrong.
Show off.
Well, this can only end well.... still at least he's got one place that asshole Yak can't keep him from performing.
Yes, yes she will..... or at least try. Still he's taking it very well.
Oh damn.. this is Trixie getting her amulet, isn't it?
Okay, what is with a 'The' is it's just one of many? That part.... doesn't quite work. It could have just been something unique Sombra or his dad had that they found in the rubble, so making it just something that the Empire had at least several of doesn't mix with a "The" and the way it was treated as something unique.
Damnit Trixie! Can we hurry up and get Starlight around so she has someone else to be obsessively clingy about?
Yeeeaaahh, this is looking worse and worse....
Ah, letting her know about Saturnia?
Can we have Chryssi put in charge of Equestrian Sex-Ed?
1. Smart move on Shiny's part.
2. I love how he is not the least bit surprised by this.
3. Shiny, you know it's going to happen eventually.
4. ALL the kinky fun times!
So this was sweet, mostly following the ep, with a few added bits of fun, plus setting things up for how the Changelings will be working and getting settled in. And a few hints at a large, looming threat.
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Well no one said the others survived. Though this time it's got a more amusing story once some one asks Sombra about it.
So really, I don't get why they're letting Chrysalis do anything after she tried to take over equestria. If she hasn't reformed and turned away from evil, why trust her? I really don't get it, she seems like she's just going to do another nefarious plot of some kind to take over. And if they're letting her do whatever, they say no to letting her have Shining Armor but apparently negotiations on her getting Rahs are okay? And that they seem to be apologizing to Chrysalis for the invasion? It just seem like they're inviting a viper into their midst that is bound to bite someone.
Though Trixie grabbing the Alicorn Amulet there at the end is a bit dissapointing. She doesn't seem to have the same antagonistic relationship with her she did in canon, so why woukd she need it to defeat Twilight and take Rahs for herself? Twilight isn't preventing anyone from romancing him. In fact it looks like Trixie is falling in line with the rest of the people who lust for Rahs, wanting to take him and possess him for themselves. Which is a shame, because out of those interested in him she seemed like the only one who had an interest other than making babies or magical power. You know, being interesting in him because she loves him rather than just using him. Really, all of his relationship prospects seem rather... non-consensual honestly.
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First, this Chryssi isn't an outright villain, just amazingly self centered. There was no 'attempt to take over Equestria', she was just a jealous ex throwing a tantrum and trying to ruin her ex's wedding thinking that somehow she could win her back. While there were more parts to it for a longer term plan, it was to over time try and get changelings accepted as equal citizens and not have to hide, not take over. While it's been made clear that yeah, she's done some messed up things in the past, it's also clear she really just wants her changelings to be safe and secure. Her mutual hate-on with Celestia, though entertaining at times, causes a lot of issues for her 'lings and is the primary issue that's kept hem in hiding till now.
All those plans went out to window when the Crystal Empire reappeared and brought with it a potential endless food source that doesn't require feeding off other sophants. And she's not going to screw anypony over, if nothing else then because the ones she'd be hurting would be Cadance and Shining Armor, and she is way too terrified of pissing off Twilight to even think of trying that. Beyond that, she already has everything she wants. Her Changelings are allowed to be open about who they are and part of society without having to pretend not to be, they have a potential endless food source noone will get pissy about them using, and she gets to have all the kinky sex with a literal Love Goddess she wants.
Second, give it a damn rest. Oh noes, characters have their own motivations for things regarding other characters. Guess what, you can want something specific from someone, and still care about them overall. Hell, both Jynx and Saturnia's attraction to him is in large part based on a respect for his abilities and strength. Added onto that, this is dealing with three entirely separate cultures and how they see relationships.
well... thats certainly an interesting twist.
God damnit TDR I said I didn’t want to know how in the last chapter of the last book!
Epic chapter in its own right... LoL... Shining Armor bear Flurryheart perhaps?
Ponys can't get Changelings pregnant but how about Changelings on Ponys ~♡
Or would that be 'Rahs, the Great and Powerful'?
Shining become the Spitroast, than Cadance than Chrysalis. Fair is fair ♡
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I think they should be both great and powerful ♡
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seriously shining can become the meat in the sandwich for Cadence and Chrysalis i mean really with how freaky he and cadence get that seems to be the next logical step for them
A running joke was born...