Nopony knows where magic really originates from. It is one of the best hidden secrets of Equestria. The truth is, magic is made in a facility like any other thing. Though magic comes from a death factory. It's a thing that Sweetie Belle will find out, if she fails her test to see if she is being a true-unicorn. The mysterious facility itself, is operated by three all to familiar ponies.
But she isn't alone in the horrors of the place. The sister if another familiar pony also happened to be taking those very same tests. Teamed up together, they set everything on everything to make it out. Alive.
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This fiction was born in my own mind and got a little help from giddygoose863 and Fire Spark.
Listen to the song created for this fiction created by justcross7!
Before you are all going to wonder, this is the a story that has been going through my major re-writing/re-editing. I changed a lot of parts from the story, mostly involving explaining and story flow while trying to cut it loose from its RF origin. The ratings on this story are as they were on the previous version. And there are still any grammatical or structural errors, please, do me a favor and do not point them out... Further more, I would like to point out as a Dutchmare writing in a foreign language, you can not get everything 100% accurate. I thank you kindly for taking this into consideration. ~Rarity
/)>3<(\. So awesome!
*twitch, twitch*
2107210 I assume you did enjoy it.
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I enjoyed it about as much as I would enjoy having my intestines ripped out through my ear.
so, yeah I enjoyed it, quite a lot.
Where has my sanity gone?
Edit: I was being sincere, I actually would enjoy having my intestines ripped out through my ear
2107474 In response to your own question, and you my correct me if I am wring, I think your sanity left your brain and throw itself out of the window, instead of letting somepony else do it for you.
But i am truly glad you did enjoy it.
Well it is a little more enjoyable. But I know it says there will be a sequel. How many stories will there be
2516497 Hmhmhm, I told you that is version was better then the 'original', but yes. There will be a sequel to this story. Two to be exact. At least that is what I have planned, who knows, maybe there are more stories to come in the series.
But for now, The Art of Magic II: Secrecy of the Facility is patiently waiting to see the light of day. I first need to get a couple other things out of the way before releasing that little gem.
Damn.
I don't know what to say. Neat story!
Fuck... Holy shit, Rarity is twisted!!!!!!
1594083 Well, I hadn't read this Neil after the edits; but it's still an awesome story. Even so, I wouldn't fail an escape!
2720796 I am glad that you like it so far my dear. And take this from me, Rarity is only going to get more crazy in the sequel. Maybe not as 'in your face' but more mentally.
About you escaping the place...that is going to be a little touching and puzzling moment actually.
Nice job. Im amazed how far into your stories i get. I seriously just started this one about 20 minutes ago. Good job on being interesting.
4945913 Call it something I really can do well with my stories, create both an interesting plotline and world where it's based in. It's not easy sometimes, but oh so worth it just to hear comments like that. I'm glad that you enjoy it dear.
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On to the sequel.
Something about this is rainbow factory
5785852 It was the main source of inspiration for this story so... I think you can add 2 and 2 together now.
Okay, since you asked I will not point out all the errors and grammatical failures. I'll just say that I could empty a red pen on the two chapters I got through before I couldn't take it anymore.
If you're going to write in English please learn it. "Not my native language" covers a few mistakes in complicated areas. It doesn't cover consistent tense failures, the complete lack of a grasp on sentence structure or not understanding word flow.
5785852 it is reavled in later chapters or something that the rainbow factory was made by these very unicorns