Sweetie Belle had always looked up to Rarity. However, when Rarity criticizes Sweetie Belle on who she has decided to take to said the annual Snow Ball Sweetie Belle takes it poorly.
It isn't until she arrives at the dance that things start to turn around, but for how long? What was that that banged on the roof of the carriage? How did Rumble get such a ride in the first place? What the heck could happen when you get close to a unicorn anyway?
For CategoricalGrant's cuddlefic contest. I used all of the prompts. God help us.
Chapters (1)
I liked your story. I think you got the characters down well. And nothing happened quite the way I thought it would.
A very entertainging story, but the grammar and punctuation could use some work.