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Things haven't gone well for Mrs. Cake since she graduated from culinary school.  After being laid off from a series of jobs she and her husband have had to take odd jobs back in their hometown of Ponyville.  

Late one night a visitor arrives with an odd request from an unexpected guest.  

First Published
18th Nov 2016
Last Modified
18th Nov 2016
#1 · 27w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

A bloodthirsty, axe yielding Griffin comes inside a bakery, and the next thing you know, it was the best day of her life.

:rainbowderp:... :rainbowkiss:...

:rainbowlaugh:I LOVE IT!!

You got a fave sir.

#2 · 27w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

Yeah, this was well and truly demented. Really good job! Not often you see origin stories for the cakes of all ponies.

#3 · 27w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Pfffahahaha! When I read the description I thought this was just going to be a gore fest (nothing wrong with that, just not my kind of thing), but I'm glad I gave it a chance! This made my night, thank you.

#4 · 27w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

That was...okay I'm really not certain what it was, but it, uh, certainly was it.

#5 · 27w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Great story. Loved it.

#6 · 27w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

I always like stories that give class and depth to serial killers. Axe-wielding psychopaths have feelings too, you know.

#8 · 27w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

:pinkiecrazy: this is already getting intense :pinkiegasp:

#9 · 27w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

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Thank you all for taking the time to read my story!  I truly appreciate it!

#10 · 27w, 1d ago · · ·

>>7734180 Twaz good... You are welcome....

#12 · 26w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

This dude is pretty hardcore crazy, but this is some pretty interesting headcanon.  Kind of a thematic riff on Cupcakes without going all the way.  I dig it!

#13 · 26w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

>>7740212 Cupcakes... heh... cupcakes... Heh Heh.  Heh heh heh. Mwa ha ha! MWA HAHAHAHAHAHA!  

#14 · 26w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

Well, he seems like a well adjusted gentleman. I like him.

#15 · 26w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7747268 Oh yes! I mean once you get to know yourself and what you like everything does tend to find it's place!

#16 · 26w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7748458 Ah, sadly I don't think this world is kind enough to offer us such a reward.

#17 · 24w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

... WELL NOW!

That was... something.

I like the something!

#18 · 24w, 5d ago · · ·

>>7772870 Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

#19 · 18w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

A delightful black comedy. I approve! :ajsmug:

#20 · 18w, 3d ago · · ·

>>7876824 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

#21 · 18w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

Interesting. I like it. Good conversation with the two. You haven't truly experienced life until you've had a polite conversation with a bloody, yet oddly charming axe murderer.

#22 · 18w, 12h ago · 1 · ·

>>7886627 I had fun writing this one; glad you liked it.  A charming axe murderer that you like? Would you say he's a ... cut above the rest? ... I'll see myself out.

#23 · 2w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

What a sharp young lad with a promising future.  After all, twenty is Scythe level.

#24 · 2w, 4d ago · · ·

>>8154005 Ah yes met the fellow in line at the bank once don't you know... asked him if he could break a ten... Hamilton never saw it coming...

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