This story is a sequel to Control the Power
Flaming Star felt as if his father was trying to force him into becoming a business man, but being the music lover that he is, he came up with a plan to maybe put an stop to his fathers attempt. But was it successful?
Edited by Helping Hoof
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/443501/reviewing-time-for-a-conversation
Better spelling, but now I feel like this story is lacking in plot. Keep working on it. You're getting there. (And I just realized that this story is two years old. I can't wait to see a more recent work to see how you've improved.)
A review for YOU.
Here is your WAR review: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/215274/reviewers-mansion/thread/492778/war-reviews-time-for-a-conversation-by-armid