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armid


Only those who follow their dreams will get to see them come true!

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This story is a sequel to Control the Power


Flaming Star felt as if his father was trying to force him into becoming a business man, but being the music lover that he is, he came up with a plan to maybe put an stop to his fathers attempt. But was it successful?


Edited by Helping Hoof

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Better spelling, but now I feel like this story is lacking in plot. Keep working on it. You're getting there. (And I just realized that this story is two years old. I can't wait to see a more recent work to see how you've improved.)

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