In Her Favour

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Lore Horse

Lore Horse #1 · Dec 14th, 2018 · 4 · 1 ·

I love this! All I can do is think she deserves this. I applaud Coco's initiative.

Coco shuttered as she looked at Suri, clenching the girl’s skirt in her first, feeling angry but not showing it on her face. Coco’s heart raced as she felt a small sense of leverage over her pushy employer, temporarily liberated from the girl’s hold and her own anger snapped.
“No.”
“...what did you just-”
“No.”
“Coco, what the fuck are you trying to pull. If you think I’m going to let you off easy with-”
“Suri!” Coco stamped her foot, blushing as she clenched her fists, not entirely sure how to look angry. “I quit.”
For a brief moment, Suri was speechless, watching as Coco exited the room.
“Coco, what the fuck! Coco, get back here or you’re fired! ...Coco, that’s my fucking skirt!” Suri stared for a moment as no response came back, slowly releasing that she was screaming at an empty door. Her face glowed red with anger but unsure if she could keep up yelling. “Okay… what the fucking fuck…”

YES!

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #2 · Dec 14th, 2018 · · ·

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Hey thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it
It was a lot of fun writing angry Coco

OmniFox

OmniFox #3 · Dec 14th, 2018 · · ·

What you think of Twilight and Coco Pommel as a couple?

Sage the Ero Harem Kami

Sage the Ero Harem Kami #4 · Dec 14th, 2018 · · 1 ·

Suck Suri you bitch that's what you get!!

Lightbuster30

Lightbuster30 #5 · Dec 14th, 2018 · · ·

If wonder if there is a pregnancy risk here? Suri sure didn't want the cum in her, wanted it out as quickly as possible, and the ending makes a fairly big deal about Suri unable to rid her pussy of the cumshot.

Either way, this was hot asf. Was hoping for almost exactly this situation as soon as I saw the title, and was not disappoint. Take my like.

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #6 · Dec 14th, 2018 · · ·

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I've never considered the pairing
I've considered doing a RariCoco fic
But I don't know how well Cocolight would work
hmm... okay it might actually be cute

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #7 · Dec 14th, 2018 · · ·

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I didn't have a pregnancy risk in mind while writing it
But I suppose it's open ended enough for that to be the case

Lightbuster30

Lightbuster30 #8 · Dec 15th, 2018 · · ·

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Ah , well I was just curious. Mostly because of how it seemed to shift from an annoyance to an actual problem near the end. I may have gotten a vibe like based on the dialogue and description of scenes. I tend to nitpick.

OmniFox

OmniFox #9 · Dec 15th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Plus with Sci-Twi's 'package', Coco wants to know what it feels like.

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #10 · Dec 15th, 2018 · · ·

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No I totally get where you're coming from
My intention was that by the end she was just kind of overwhelmed by it all
But I actually like that it could be read either way

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