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ActivistVictor


Back, but for reasons I won't share.

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An attempt to partially convey my experiences as someone with high functioning autism. You don't have to love it but if so how about acting older than the intended target demographic MLP and opting to just move on to something else instead of passive-aggressively spamming dislike without even taking 2 seconds to explain your reasoning, (which has sadly been a major problem on this site for me so far)... so you know, DON'T act like the entitled brat of your generic Karen... you think you can handle that.... heh... well that makes one of us then

Trixie Lulamoon is a notorious troublemaker around Canterlot High, and has caused no shortage of antics at the school during her tenure there thus far. Needless to say, the Principals are more than fed up with her, especially Luna, so when she once again commits an infraction, this time by outright yelling and threatening a group of the school's special ed students, she is given a choice, either help out with the special olympics throughout the rest of the year, both as reparations for her past actions and to get some perspective... or be expelled. And as if that didn't make her mad enough the person she got into an altercation with is part of the team she's helping. This should get interesting








This story intends to touch on serious issues facing the disabled community, including but not limited to social stigma, societal pressures, prejudices, sing song voices aka baby talk, and controlling parents and programs and their effects on people in them. Hopefully I do a good job of showing these things, but if I mess something up please leave a (respectful) comment pointing it out, since I want to make sure a serious topic like this is depicted properly

special thanks to the fimfiction writing help for advice on this

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 20 )

I give you points for being original and not using Derpy as the mentally disabled person.

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Thanks, tbh I didn’t even think about that but you make a valid observation

Comment posted by ActivistVictor deleted Aug 9th, 2019

Really nice chapter, I can't wait to continue! However I have a few corrections and questions.

1.) You described Trixie's skin as Teal (which is a blue-green color) when I think a better description would be light blue or aquamarine.
2.) “Insolent whelps!” She said “Just because you jealous . . . I think you meant you're or you are.
3.) Just as a suggestion maybe you could make characters swearing or using alternatives more consistent? It comes off as weird for one character to say shit but another to say blowhard.

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thanks, nice to know someone enjoys this.

fixed the first two changes you noted, guess spell check doesn't always work right on docs.

as for the blowhard, that was supposed to be a reference to how sunset calls her a manipulative blowhard in the forgotten friendship short, (i make a lot of references in here. the intent is to make people laugh... but tbh idk if they help or hurt the story)

“What is the minimum angle relative to the earth’s surface at which a space shuttle could be launched using traditional boosters and achieve low earth orbit?....”

Does anyone in the comments know the answer?

“Well, perhaps we wouldn’t need to talk about them that way if they didn’t constantly have us attending to their disturbances all year, now would we?” Luna said. “We swear, we lost count of the number of detentions we have had to oversee this school year back in March.”

I feel like Luna is that type of person to give you detention for not following the school dress code.

Meanwhile, Celestia, having grabbed her own coffee from the nearby machine, went back to her desk and put it down before she furrowed her eyebrows in thought as she waited for it to cool. “ I really don’t want to expell you Trixie…” Celestia thought to herself, “But Luna's right, we can't just sit back and let you do anything you want anymore. So,for your sake, you had better not mess up this last chance.” She then sighed and rubbed her temples, trying to mitigate the stress induced migraine she could already feel coming.

Ok, they have no right to expel trixie if that’s all she did.

Let me would have been one of those students in chs, sunset would have been dealt with before eqg even began.

You could blame a lot of people for that conflict happening.

Aww man. When I saw this update I was really looking forward to it.

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itwell, i suppose it's good someone thinks that, it's still on fanfiction and AO# if you really want to read it, I'm just fed up with this particular site

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And, you’re saying that those sites are better? Because if so, I’m definitely gonna have to check them out.

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Idk for sure but at least there’s no dislike bar so it doesn’t give people an incentive to dislike spam just because, which i feel like a lot of folks on here do

17 people are brain dead imbeciles and likely pedos since everyone on here is a pedo

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Figure of speech, Way more than should be at least

Hope you pathetic pedos are happy you successfully bullied me into stopping this story

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Probably 18 now due to the ‘genius’ who downvoted you lol. I swear, people are so moronic sometimes

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I’m sorry this happened, no words can describe just how awful and irredeemable the jerkoffs who did this to you are! You deserved so much better, and I hope you find it, as well as get even with them someday for their sins!

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