This story is a sequel to Tales of Troubled Teens
An attempt to partially convey my experiences as someone with high functioning autism. You don't have to love it but if so how about acting older than the intended target demographic MLP and opting to just move on to something else instead of passive-aggressively spamming dislike without even taking 2 seconds to explain your reasoning, (which has sadly been a major problem on this site for me so far)... so you know, DON'T act like the entitled brat of your generic Karen... you think you can handle that.... heh... well that makes one of us then
A new transfer to CHS, Pocket Pair wants nothing more than to leave his lackluster past behind and start a new better life. But this will he easier said than done.
AU with no mirror portal or Equestria, since that seems unnecessarily complicated and irrelevant to what happens here.
Yeah. The whole Bitch Queen Sunset angle fails miserably when you take out Equestria and the portal. I'm also hesitant to try this after the abismal failure of the original story.
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does it though? there's more than one way for someone to become toxic, and it doesn't require a mirror portal if it's done right. plus , really, is the mirror portal necessary to make EG function? Other franchises have had bullies with motivations not relating to taking over an alternate world, and these characters all acted about the same as Sunset, sans of course the last minute reformation Sunset got, though unfortunately that's mostly because they were all mainly hate sinks who lacked major defining characteristics and just existed for viewers to hate. I mean think about it for a second, if you removed Sunset Shimmer from the original EG and replaced her with say Francis from Fairly Odd Parents... or pre-reformation Diamond Tiara... and gave them a last minute reformation using the elements of harmony, what would really change about the plot? Probably not a whole lot, which just underlines how much room for improvement there is in the way Sunset was handled in the first movie and how her character was developed.
I’ll give anything a try at least once I never read your other stories but at least I’ll stick around to see how this one goes
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thanks, wish others were as open minded as this
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i know this is replying to an old comment but i just have to because I think it highlights just what's so wrong with almost everyone on this site.... no accountability. you say you're hesitant to try and give MY story a chance because it was an abysmal failure.... which is basically implying it's MY fauly that it failed, and no one else hewre had any fault in how things turned out. but in reality, that's so false it's laughable you'd even say that.
Let's start with one thing... reading my work, or anyone's work for that matter... is to an extent a priveledge... I mean after all, people put hours into each chapter to get it jusut right. And while I don't use that as an excuse to demand people worship the ground I walk on or else, I DO expect a small amount of basic respect in return for the time and effort I put into it, similar to how I would expect you to at least be polite to me if I go out of my way to do a favor for you. eg,, if I say I want you to stop flooding dislikes because the story is trying to vent about past exclusion and rejection, and that you acting in such a way s just reopening old wounds..and that if you must dislike anyway, please leave a comment explaining yourself so I get where it's coming from and know what changes I should make... i expect people to respect those wishes, which really, are things any decent person probably does in their daily life anyway so it shouldn't be putting anyone out too much to listen. Plus, it's not like other stories aren't treated with more decorum than mine ratings-wise, so for me to say I want that level or respect also to is not out of line on my part, nor is it me asking for preferential treatment over other users.
But no, the viewers didn't do that. Instead, the persisted in their toxic behavior knowing full well it was hurting me, and in fact doubled down in some cases after I clarified it just to spite me. Now I tried to power though it... but a person can only take so much, and suffice to say, after having my motivation progressively crushed by the new batch of dislike spam I got every time I posted a new chapter, and having no one leaving any comments supporting my story or at least offering constructive criticism showing they at least respected me enough as a person to listen to me, I got fed up with it.. and of course I stopped writing. After all, why should I put HOURs of MY time into this if everyone on here is going to act like an entitled asshole who thinks they are above the rules of common courtesy and can treat me however the please and can blatantly ignore my simple requests? I have better things to do with my time than spend it trying to appease a bunch of ingrates who clearly expect every aspect of my work to be tailor made to fit their tastes will never be satisfied until things are 100% how they arbitrarily want them with no room for compromise. (This isn't THEIR story, it's MINE after all), and I respect myself too much to continue putting time and effort into writing for people like that, (just as I would respect myself enough to not site back and continue to work under a boss who was going out of their way to make the job hard and screw with me.)\
And if you don't love the story or wholly agree with everything I said here, that's fine, and understand that all the hate is not directed at you... I'm mainly just fed up with everyone on here and I think it's coming out here because this was sort of the straw that broke the camel's back... but regardless, at LEAST have enough decency to acknowledge the reason the story failed isn't entirely my fault, it was at best everyone's fault and probably weighted vastly more towards how others gave me no respect to the point where it would put Rodney Dangerfield to shame and imply I'm wrong for having enough self-respect to take offense to how I was treated for so long.
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Bag, blaming the author for not completing a story when people incessantly vote bombed it and destroyed their motivation is not swell
Reminding the vote bombers that you still fail at life and still wouldn’t be missed if you die because you have no redeeming qualities
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Reminder that you’re still an imbecile
Hope you pathetic pedos are happy you killed my motivation by bullying me, fuck you
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Ikr; too bad no one here has a realistic sense of accountability
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Yes because it’s the OP’s fault for taking a break for their mental health and not the people who bullied them in the first place’s.
Do you have a functioning brain? Or are you really that terrible you see nothing wrong with the most blatant case of victim blaming I’ve ever seen? I’m legitimately curious