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Ooga Booga


Edward can't make up his mind on what he wants to do. Become a pony? Or remain human?

Worried about a past he can't forget, he finds himself standing outside the Bureau looking in on many a days. Hoping to find the answer he's seeking.

When a pony with a mission suddenly pops into his life. He's forced to confront buried pains, and an uncertain future.

As well as discover just how he ties into all of this...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

Hey bro, saw this over on ponychan. I quite like it and am interested to see where its going. When should I be seeing the second chapter?

Arrgh cliffhanger! Now I have to track you! :rainbowlaugh:

that anime reference...
anyways, great story. hope to see the next chapter soon

#4 · Dec 11th, 2011 · · ·

Late. Bored. Non a fan-fic guy but not sleeping, so why not?

Wow. I wish you had more up, but I'll have to settle for what you've got. This isn't bad at all, damn good by the standards of most fan-fics. You may have converted me. I'd follow you but I'm just spending the night at a friend's, don't have internet myself. (I know, I know. "How do you live?" I don't, now leave me to my sorrow. XP) Keep it up though. I'd really like to read more the next chance I get.

Cool Story Bro, I really enjoyed it. I look forward to part 2 :pinkiesmile:


Hopefully soon. My plan is to finish this story before Christmas. Sadly waking up with a possible flu today is seriously going to cripple my ability to write.

I have to say though. I never expected to wake up today and see about ten or so emails letting me know this story is being tracked. O_O

Well, color me interested. You have an interesting story set up here and I think you are pulling it off well so far. One thing that stuck out though was that, so far, all the ponies that had talking parts were unicorns. I don't know why that stuck out at me, it just did. Overall, great start and I hope to see more. :twilightsheepish:


I really like Unicorns, so it seems all the parts for ponies I ended up putting them in the speaking roles. :derpyderp1: Pretty much it just kinda ended up that way. :derpytongue2:

Seems interesting so far, hoping to see more chapters :twilightsmile:

Looks like a good read, hoping for more :pinkiehappy:

Oh, yes! I remember this. I'm already tracking it. Just waiting for any update!

Still waitin' for author to deliver...


Yeah I'm sorry guys. Hate to say it, but the drive probably won't hit me till December rolls around this year. I really suck at this kinda thing. :/

As it is, I need to re-work the entire first chapter.

You Must Construct Additional Chapters! ;p

Seriously, that was a good start. It's shocking that this has been waiting to be written for three years. Please continue it.

I'm sorry. I really am, but TCB stuff and me just don't mesh well right now. Perhaps I'll finally be able to finish this story that I do want to finish. Just right now I don't know when that'll be. Again I'm sorry. :/

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