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This is a direct side-story spinoff to "A Twist in the Tail".

Edge used to be human. She used to be a man. Then one day, she was foolish enough to break into a Conversion Bureau to steal some Potion. Believing it all to be a plot to 'scoop out the brains of humans', he downs it. She wakes up as a pegasus pony with an audience with the princesses...

For her crimes, she is sentenced to community service.

This won't end well ;)

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Comments ( 98 )

Please continue writing forrrreeeevvveeerrrr. Thank you.

Forever? I must have been REALLY bad in a previous life...

Now this is awesome! Keep them chapters coming!

I agree with Chatoyance. But make sure you take necessary breaks for food and sleep. Im sure constant writing for eternity could kill a person.

essentially my reaction to this whole conversation about nukes in the comment thread of this story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aaUT6p9DWxo

also, I'm really glad you're continuing this story Midnight I'm loving it so far, keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

Well, now this story's really living life
*puts on shades*
on the Edge.


you're a terrible pony and you should feel bad. (giggle:rainbowlaugh:)

:fluttercry: none responded to my posts.........:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: solution found...... POST MOAR:flutterrage:

is it wrong for all this gender bending madness to make me happy?

is it wrong for all this gender bending madness to make me happy?

..solution executed await response.....

..solution executed await response.....

No, I don't think so. It's certainly fun to write.

This story is shaping up to me more interesting than the original Twist in the Tail :rainbowderp:

I feel compelled to read this story.

So Earth is going to be consumed whether we humans like it or not. But we've still got Mars right? ...or is that going to be take away too?

I'd say read "Gypsy" and "To Save Eden" for my take on that, but the short answer is 'yes, Earth will be consumed, but no, Mars won't.'

The full answer is a bit bigger than that, and to be honest I need to re-do "To Save Eden" to make it much more betterer.


Glenn... I'm not sure if I should come back to her, but I think I must.

... It's very rare that I go from utterly hating a character, to feeling abject sympathy for them. You've done that with Edge in a masterful way, and I commend you for it. Well DONE!

Also, nice nod to Midnight's Tale there :3 I've always been intrigued where stories lay on a chronological line within a 'verse.

We've never been given a description of Edge - other than that she is a pegasus. Was this

I find that having the colors of the ponies helps me 'see' the story in my mind as I am reading it.

If I didn't, I should have!

silly midnight!

Oh my, it seems I have totally skipped the introductions for Edge, and possibly for Simone. Rather silly of me.

Simone is your classic black pony with flame red hair. It's more than possible she dyes coat, mane and tail, or both.

Edge on the other hoof is a dainty little thing. She's a snow-white pegasus with blonde hair - kind of like Surprise, actually. She's actually wearing a body that all the Stallions fantasize (not dream, there's a difference) about, which makes it so much worse. He wasn't all that butch before, but now? ...oh dear.

She is, however, straight... sort of. She does actually like mares, the fact she's wearing a female body hasn't changed that and it won't. The worst thing in the world for her would be a stallion making advances - the second worse would be a mare.


Basically, Midnight's Tail is first. This is after Part 8 of "A Twist in the Tail" but concurrent - more or less - with the rest.

The minisodes inside twist happen during chapters 4-8 of Twist (I need to get back to them at some point!).

"the day the sky changed" is all over the shop as a collection, "Gypsy" is near the end of the 'verse, but before "To save eden".

"The end" is not part of my timeline or, as far as I know, any other. Its "Ten rounds" -like but not set in that universe because I don't know if it's canon there either.

Timelines are fun, but confusing.

I'm enjoying this one so far, keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Yes. :yay:

I don't know where this is going, but it's going good.

Oh, freaking wow. This is just top notch. I am adoring this.

Oh, Edge. You're going to become a better person despite yourself. :pinkiehappy:

The people demand more.

And the misadventures of Edge continues...

I think it was quite cruel of Bedlam and Simone to vandalize that cardboard cut out of Edge.

Looking forward to more story.

Can we slow down on the unrealistic crazy?

Poor Edge... good thing Soarin' and Spitfire were there to save her flank... even if it was ungainly. I think it's high time Edge had a heart-to-heart with another mare...

Snowflake... Seems like a good name for her really. Wonder if she'll eventually adopt it? :pinkiehappy:

Life-saving Wingboners?

Well I was going to slow down on the unrealistic crazy, but then I took an arrow to the knee.

They had to be good for something, right?

You know I'm not sure?

Glad to see you're still alive! Hope you're doing okay :) I didn't think it was that good... kinda somewhere between silly and serious...

Great Story, I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to more chapters :twilightsmile:

59380 Pfft... :rainbowlaugh: I'm not gonna lie: That made me laugh! XD Thanks!

WOOHOO! New story! Hope Edge gets annoyed by stallions wherever she goes! That'd teach her a lesson! XD (Of course, by the 'end' of the story, I'm sure you'll have done a good job of making us feel bad for her, ect, us WANTING her to have a S.O., whether colt or filly, yada yada yada. But that's later. Right now, we're allowed to hate her guts, and so I shall! XD)

HUZZAH! Time to continue my onward journey to chapter three! VE GO! ~ALLONS-Y!~

96542 I concur! Especially with her coloration, ect, it would work really well!

Looking forward to the next chapter... I FINALLY CAUGHT UP! 8D :pinkiehappy: (At least, I THINK I have...)

~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

soarin ship? please continue this

Ah, been too long since I read this story, looking forward to your next chapter Midnight :twilightsmile:

A new chapter finally, I demand MORE!

When will you upload the next one?

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