Evening Storm was just having a normal day when Applejack came to him with a rather odd request.
(Why my OC and Applejack? Uh... Because the Sun Broke!)
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How many people do you think are going to be disappointing that it's not what they thought it was? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png That last line killed me. It would be nice if they were actually in a relationship, but that would of killed the joke. Also, some weird random capitalization here and there, but I liked how you wrote AJ's dialect. It's some of the better ones I've read.
The thing about these stories is that the "teen" or even "everyone" rating gives it away instantly.
you clever bastard you....
was a funny read
................what the hell did i just read
That was very funny indeed
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And the 'Comedy' and 'Random' tags don't?
By brain.... its broken. This story took away the few remaining brain-points I had left.
Pinkie pulls prank... ITS A CRITICAL HIT!
Brain loses 289 brain-points
Negetive-infinity brain points remaining
Brain explodes.....TWICE!!
This was great, but I hope this doesn't become a thing.
Lol I love the description
FUNNY man F.U.N.N.Y
1615232 Wait I just turned on serious mode
And I just thought of something
Rainbow Triplets activate:
My sides were hurting by the end, but srsly one thing just rubs me the wrong way about this story. Why the buck is everyone so embarrassed to clop if it is so popular across Equestria?
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It's not that everyone is embarrassed by it, it's APPLEJACK is embarrassed by it. While it's a popular thing to do across Equestria, it's not something most ponies would expect AJ to be into. Thus why she's secretive about it. You'll notice that Big Mac knew all along and thought his sister was being silly.
As for why Evening is embarrassed, it's because nopony has ever asked him to be their partner before. He never really was popular with mares.
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:/ seems legit. BTW the OA video on fanfics ate the rest of my free time. Now I can't stop reading and writing this crap. so...thanks for that. (sarcasm self test complete)
1739172 Because reasons! :P