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PonyJoel


I'm mostly into dark/horror stories during the night. Luna is my favorite Princess. Spike is my favorite Dragon that deserves better. Reading and writing stories based on him is fun.

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I highly doubt Zecora can be that much help to Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle. Cause to recap, what did their Anon-a-Miss stunt do: Ruined their sisters' lives by costing them two of their friends, caused the death of their ex-best friend's mother, which ended up severing the bonds between all three of them, and got them kicked out of CHS; and basically every high school, for life. That; IMO, is something that no amount of therapy can help truly recover from. TL;DR: They're scarred for life and therapy can't truly heal those scars.

8942812
That is true but it's worth a shot at the least.

As a wise clown once said "All it takes is one bad day..."

Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle are constantly replaying what Scootaloo said to them, aren't they?

8942931
They are. It's a constant reminder to them.

I am hope that Zecora will sort this out soon, at least that Rarity prevent Sweetie Belle from commit suicide, while Applejack won’t leave Apple Bloom’s side again.

8942938
It's a lot that's going on.

8942952
I am hope that Applejack and Rarity will bond their sister again soon.

8942957
Only time will tell.

8942963
I am hope that you’re right.

8942997
We'll see how it plays out.

Until everything has gone bad in the wrong direction, end of story.

*cue in the story credits*

Just kidding! :derpytongue2:

Although, in my opinion, I don't everything will be a better day or year for them, perhaps far from it.

8943043
That's more likely the outcome but we have to wait and see.

Tomorrow everyone hopes it can be a better day. The Apple family and Rarity's family hope that Zecora can be a blessing for both Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle. Unknown to all of them, something else did happen in school today. A group of students who are trying to make a change in Canterlot High and so far with them, things are going in the right direction.

I wonder who these students are...:trixieshiftleft:.

8943573
The answer is obvious if you look back in Anon-A-Miss: Friendship is Home. Trust me, can't miss it. Or you can wait till later tonight or earlier tomorrow when I release it.

8943578
I'll take some time off and look back at the first story:pinkiesmile:.

8943593
Alright then. Good luck finding those group of students who are trying to make a change in Canterlot High and so far with them, things are going in the right direction.

8943681
I think you can wait till later tonight. I'm nearly finished with the next sequel story.

8943738
But if you still want to look for them then here https://www.fimfiction.net/story/407185/9/anon-a-miss-friendship-is-home/words-of-advice-family-meeting-another-loss-new-family-part-1

Trust me, can't miss them. When you do find it then don't say. Just let me know that you found it.

A group of students who are trying to make a change in Canterlot High and so far with them, things are going in the right direction.

And thus special Agent bon bon is born.....along with lyra and several student with common sense

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i don't know i felt like bon bon and lyra probably the only student who actually can regain their sanity post anon a miss

while everyone took it to a f*cking nose dive, especially applebloom and sweetie belle since

there is a quote rather military:
"you see a different path stretch out in front of you. The path you could've taken at the first step. We are all on this road together. The good men who fight for wrong causes... and the corrupt men who cloak themselves in self righteousness. Each one of them convinced they are on the side of the angels."
Pvt. Jack Mitchell (COD: Advanced Warfare)

Applebloom and sweetie belle both pushed out by their sister and ignored while Scootalo do it out of depression due to her father death. Because of that their heart and mind are corrupted they became "the corrupt men/women who cloak themselves in self righteousness". how ever Applebloom and Sweetie Belle took it to far, so far that they believe that they're on "the side of the angel".

8943844
Damn, that was well put out.

8943884
Well, the next story is out already. You can now see it for yourself.

8943896
You should watch me if you want to see more sequels as the timeline expands.

Nice chapter but you probably should change to mature just to be safe also love your new Villain

8946465
Thanks.

I changed it just to be safe like you said.

Have you read Anon-A-Miss: Friendship is Home?

8946495
Yes after reading it I couldn't wait to see what comes next though I didn't expect several different stories at the same time.

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I couldn't really leave just say it's done and all happy ending to some and others miserable. The need to expand felt necessary. The Changeling Guild to bring the school out of the ashes from the Devastation of Anon-A-Miss, The Rainbooms dealing with the loss of Sunset Shimmer, Princess Twilight Sparkle, and Scootaloo. Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom messed up in their heads. I couldn't really leave that hanging. Then we have the current timeline in Equestria. Princess Twilight Sparkle and her friends with their new lives spreading Friendship wherever it is needed. Then there is Discord. Defender of Equestria. Sunset Shimmer now being back home and teaming up with Discord. The Reformers does sound like a cool story to go forthwith. Connecting ties with Twilight and her friend's quest from time to time. Scootaloo's new life is going great and I have another sequel for that story in mind. Last but not least we have both Blaze and Nero the Necromancer. If you read Nero the Necromancer story then remembered how the final chapter played out, there are plotholes that need filling.

My question for you is, do you want to take a guess who this demon is?

8946547
I have an idea but won't say since others are able to see this, but you did hint at it in your original story in the middle portion though only briefly and the end. Keep the good work up.

8946671
Good. It's about to get much worse for the Rainbooms. Demonic forces are not meant to play with.

8946671
Thanks. Right now I'm working on the next chapter in Equestrian Tales: Friendship's Quest. Once that is done then I can start working on Reformer's Quest.

ok this is getting creepy, why do i get feeling of exorcist and insidius vibe.....which is scary and disturbing

i think sweetie belle should be taken to the exorcist

oh maybe you should try put horror tag to on your story

8947040
I added the horror tag.

No one knows that Sweetie Belle is possessed so there is no reason for her to see an exorcist.

8947064
you know when twilight said she don't wanna help the girls.....i think it's better she focus herself on starlight glimmer

since the whole think is above her paygrade or her skill....she's a princess ok NOT an Exsorcist

8947076
The portal is shut for good. Ain't no way that it'll work. The Rainbooms are on their own. Holy Water seems to have a huge effect towards the demon. This is one tough battle to win without magic.

Anything you like about the demon in the chapter?

8947081
remind me of something from insidious

which remind any reference from your fanfic on any horror title
or
this fanfic is a crossover from some horror film

8943573
probably just bunch of one of those bleeding heart folks

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