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a prequel!
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Forgot the apostrophe and capitalize the D in dust. Also, you forgot to put a period at the end of the sentence.
Lightning's.
Mr. Not Mr-.
Comma after desk.
Rainbow apostrophe S. Also, sit spots?
Second verse, same as the verse.
AnnounceD.
Comma between paddle and she.
2 words.
Rainbow's.
It's a cute story that fits the characters. Good job.