Many years have passed and one pony, now old and sick, is about to pass on to the great unknown. its a sad fact of life that it all must end someday.
( Warning, contains character death. If you don't like sad then please look away. )
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"Never let your fear of being criticized stop you from expressing yourself through art." ~Fluttershy.
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This... Was magnificent. I don't even care that there are errors! You have done well.
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6400649 Thanks, I appreciate it.
I try my hardest to eliminate errors, but I'm not a native english speaker so a lot of things still slip through the cracks. 
Fantastic, I liked it. Make me choke up a little bit. If this is your debut, then I wonder what else you have in store for us. Keep going
6401021 Why thankyou
I'm glad you enjoyed it. my next story will probably be an action/adventure piece since thats more my usual style. I prefer to entertain people rather then give them the sad feels. but my muse is twisted little critter that way. She demands and I type 
Man, someone is cutting onions? Already?! FLUTTERSHY!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T GO!!!!!!!
My grandma just passed a few weeks ago... This made me feel a little bit better. Thank you.
6401659 im glad it helped
6401706 aww thankyou for the compliment
I hope my future scribbles will be just as enjoyable to you.
nicely done
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This is done often, but this is a good one
6402277 yeah its not the most origional thing out there. But my muse refuses to take no for an answer.
she's a selfish thing.
poor fluttershy,
may she arrive at the gates and ride eternal, shiny and chrome.
A friend taught me, "So long as we remember, They Live!"
Nicely done.
For your first shot at an MLP Fanfic, this was pretty well done. Yes, there were errors here and there, but if English isn't your native tongue, I can forgive them. Nice job!
7616317 thanks
Best pony died noooooooooooooooooooooooOoooooooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo9o9ooooooooooooooooooo.
May she rest in peace at the eternal gates of Valhalla where the brave and the kind rest for all eternity...
8029402 wouldn't she just make an awesome valkyrie?
If you can make me cry, you’ve done great.