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"Never let your fear of being criticized stop you from expressing yourself through art." ~Fluttershy.

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Many years have passed and one pony, now old and sick, is about to pass on to the great unknown. its a sad fact of life that it all must end someday.

( Warning, contains character death. If you don't like sad then please look away. )

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Comments ( 21 )

This... Was magnificent. I don't even care that there are errors! You have done well.

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6400649 Thanks, I appreciate it. :pinkiehappy: I try my hardest to eliminate errors, but I'm not a native english speaker so a lot of things still slip through the cracks. :facehoof:

Fantastic, I liked it. Make me choke up a little bit. If this is your debut, then I wonder what else you have in store for us. Keep going

6401021 Why thankyou :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you enjoyed it. my next story will probably be an action/adventure piece since thats more my usual style. I prefer to entertain people rather then give them the sad feels. but my muse is twisted little critter that way. She demands and I type :pinkiecrazy:

Man, someone is cutting onions? Already?! FLUTTERSHY!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T GO!!!!!!!

My grandma just passed a few weeks ago... This made me feel a little bit better. Thank you. :raritywink:

6401659 im glad it helped :twilightsmile:

:fluttercry: You are really good at writing. I dont cry alot but for this I did. The feels were real!... If you can do this, i'd like to see what else yore able to do.

6401706 aww thankyou for the compliment :yay: I hope my future scribbles will be just as enjoyable to you.

This is done often, but this is a good one :twilightsmile:

6402277 yeah its not the most origional thing out there. But my muse refuses to take no for an answer. :pinkiecrazy: she's a selfish thing.

poor fluttershy,

may she arrive at the gates and ride eternal, shiny and chrome.

A friend taught me, "So long as we remember, They Live!"

Nicely done.:pinkiesad2:

For your first shot at an MLP Fanfic, this was pretty well done. Yes, there were errors here and there, but if English isn't your native tongue, I can forgive them. Nice job! :twilightsmile:

Best pony died noooooooooooooooooooooooOoooooooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo9o9ooooooooooooooooooo.

May she rest in peace at the eternal gates of Valhalla where the brave and the kind rest for all eternity...

8029402 wouldn't she just make an awesome valkyrie? :raritystarry:

Comment posted by Lion Fire Lord deleted June 12th
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