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HeartfireFirebrand
A leaner of SFM who writes ocassionally
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it's kinda rushed and well...It's hard to take seriously. i mean the sudden scene where Twilght and the others were hurt and almost killed....YYYYEEEAAAAHHHHH
That realy hard to take seriously t was just there to give a excuse to turn Sunset in to a demon and the form Yeahhh....
it very unorginal, didn;t even bother to change it. you used the ugly form from the first movie as Sunset's new form.
the Dazzling s escaping the same way yeah....that could been different.
Lastly i skipped the song as no no no no no.....It's so...just no. Dumb, it feels.......stupid now. With Sunset in her demonic form sing with twilight it doesn't look or soud good what so ever.
I cringe CRINGE when I tried to imagine it.
No thumbs down, it a nice idea but badly done, you could done so much better but feel you weren't trying.
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Okay I will rewrite that part with the song, also I did want to bring the the original demon form back.
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I have finished the changes, I hope I dealt with your complaints effectively.
I read this ne, as you suggested, and enjoyed it. I don't really have any complaints, however, the part where the girls were being attacked was a little awkward, and maybe just a tad short. It was really good though, despite that. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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I do have both an Anon-A-Miss and Friendship games sequel planned
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Oooh. You'll have to give me some time to read the rest of your stories. I'm currently in a lot of pain so typing is a bit difficult, along with focusing on my computer screen. I'll get there though.
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Okay
My biggest problem is the spelling errors.
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This is a very old story, I'm not actually sure if I'll even return to these. I have a lot of new ideas buzzing around my head.
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Its not just this one that has errors.....Ps I'd appreciate it if you would continue this series.
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Maybe one day.
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Fine.....
It’s a good concept, but I couldn’t help cringing as the story went on. I didn’t even get to finish it.