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Wolf Warrior
Death is not the end, loss of conviction is the end.
Wolf Warrior
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NP I just hope I can give my best that this deserves
Even though my typical type of weaponry sure isn't something that most would consider a weapon, that still really speaks to me.
And THAT is something that I laugh and cringe at simultaneously!
This story seems familiar.
I'm interested do continue
Good start. Hope it keeps up.
This should be interesting
My good sir I tell you I enjoy this
Pretty good, almost same as the original, keep it up and give us updates soon.
If this is a remake its of to a great start :)
Really good story, I'm looking forward to future chapters
I am wonderong one thing....will you be altering the story in any way from its original or will it just be a re-post?
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Its going to kind of be the same only with more detail wise. It will go up to the original author last chapter he/she posted. After that it will be my ideas. The author didn't know where to the take the story so I will be coming up with that.
Does that answer you question?
Here have a Comment. :)
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Lol thank you
Here, have anyone. 😆
I still somewhat dislike Celestia in this story so far
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I wouldn't say that i dislike her, but i do also get an uncomfortable vibe with her, personally i have a bigger problem with the mane 6.
I don't know why but i don't want Garyx to forgive the mane 6 just yet. I think they should do something for him such as publicly apologize to Garyx in front of the town and explain that they attacked Ponyville's newest hero because of a misunderstanding that they made. The mane 6 shouldn't just get away with attacking someone and then expect to be forgiven.
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Might end up hating her more later than. I am going to try to make her like dumbledore in a way. Like a chessmaster bwhahaha
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Trust me. He is not going to forgive them for awhile probably not ever
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hmmm...... I agree what you said, but the mane 6 should do more than that if they want Garyx forgiveness
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Will be looking forward to see how things progress, i really like your take on this story so good luck with the writing
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ugh god I am not a big Harry Potter anymore
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Thank you
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Lol.
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i am not a big fan of Harry Potter as I was when I was a kid
Hmm, maybe because you and your mate have made a point of "letting their fear fester" when it comes to dragons? They literally have encouraged the perception that dragons are evil. Gee, I can't imagine why the humans would react negatively to a child who looks like a dragon. These two dragons are ignorant hypocrites, in my opinion.
And again. Scared villagers? Don't bother making any attempt to aleviate those fears or try to come to an accord. Let's just exacerbate the problem by killing a bunch of people. That won't have any repercussions in future generations...
It's very unclear that this dragon is dead. You may want to go back and edit at some point.
Aaand now the misanthrope diatribe. Really hope this turns around soon or he at least gets to the MLP aspects. It's getting old...
About time.
A less clunky form of that expression is, "it is better to have it and not need it, than to need it and not have it." The 'not' is easy for eyes to skip when reading.
Okay, this is just dumb. I'm sorry for being blunt about it, but the bandits wouldn't just stand there and let the duo make a scene. The archer would have just shot Garyx in the back.
How you should have written it:
1. Haruko gets shot.
2. Garyx immediately starts fighting back and kills all the bandits.
3. Garyx returns to Haruko's side, where she says her last words.
Doing heartfelt confessions/etc. during battle (when its literally just those two versus everyone else) is just stupid.
Side note: You never really explained why Haruko's parents shot Garyx down to begin with. He was literally just flying around and they shot him. If they were violent people it would be fine, but you wrote them as very non-confrontational. It doesn't make sense.
Sorry for all the negativity! This story is still a lot better than most out there.
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You call it negativity I call it constructive critiscm
Garyx should train spike to be a knight like himself.
If the story is simply bwing reposted, then we are going to see a lot of Garyx-hazing for a while.
It's nice to see that you are still writing chapters for this story, I love reading it
Keep on the good work
Oh good luck. I await karma with anticipation
can't wait what you have in mind for both Celestia's and the mane 6's punishment from Garyx
You're missing words in several places.
Dont escape just leave
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Damn I thought I got all of them. Was it every chapter?
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I don't remember. It might be the last couple of chapters. I'd have to re-read the whole thing. And I don't want to try to pick them all oit because the only device I have that is working well enough is my phone.
I appreciate and yea I understand that lol
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I guess you like it? Aleast so far?
this Is epic plz more
please more
Garyx is awesom!
Garyx the Dragonknight? No thanks, I'm calling him Aemon.
A mary sue human "OC" with dragon powers. Really busted the almonds coming up with that huh?
HA!