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IamaGhostwriterBoo


I write for fun. I read for fun.

Comments ( 23 )

I hope you don't plan to use pics for all the chapters, you can describe it in detail.

More than a bit rushed, but decent enough.
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I'm lost on anything Digimon related after gen 1.

What does mean 'Amazonian in height'?

Yeah no.....

Feels way too rushed so i can't really see myself being able read this....
Not disliking though

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7 foot tall would be short. 8-10 feet more typical.

Dude this is a pretty good start, lets see how far it can go.

Has potential but a bit rushed

An Amazon is a big, strong, warrior-like woman, someone who reminds you of the mythical Greek women-warriors, the Amazons. Describing someone as an Amazon can sometimes have a negative tinge. ... But Amazon can also be an admiring term for a statuesque, athletic woman.
There is nothing about height in that definition of Amazonian the only reason Celestia is eight feet tall is that she is the tallest pony in the show.
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Minus the human as you can see.

too many pics. DUDE they ruin a fics flow and makes writers lazy!!

Holy fuck, what is with these images? This has got to be in my top 5 laziest fics I've ever read, and I've been around for a while!

can’t wait for to fight the bitch

dude you gonna update anytime soon?

I like the idia and the plot. I cant wait for the next one.

Why am I followed to this edgy shit?

Please get an editor. I don't know if English is your first language or not, but the grammar was atrocious at parts.
Otherwise it's great.

"Zecora is my name and positions are my game," She said shaking my hand. " But may I ask if it not too rude if your spirit is no longer needed, why have you not changed back to a dude?"

I believe this is supposed to say potions

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