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What are we, if not the creators of worlds beyond imagining?

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I don't think that the Protagonist is that much of an gary sue, but the title 'god' is a rather interesting choice of a title.

8948799
He is a god, but, a god of multiple things, I don't want to spoil stuff, but, you will see after I get the ball rolling.

8948828
Good because I am a big fan of completely overpowered Humans in Equestria. That was no sarcasm btw,

Seems interesting, maybe the ponies are a bit too eager to befriend him but meh! I made two character fall in love in two chapters so who am I to judge? I'll keep this story in sight though so keep it up.

P.s.: if you want to make him freaking OP give him Blacklight hehehehe...

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I got something way better than blacklight, and way more OP we're talking OPAF status.

Considering this is a Displaced, you don't really need go too much on OP when there is no need for it. I mean really, this is Equestria, not a land of demi-gods.

8948898
No, see, he made his displacement to be powerful, to actually get god status, I can't go into it much without ruining the plot of the story.

8948950
Except you had the power as an author to prevent it, now he has all this extra power for nothing untill you give him something use it for.

8948968
Comedy tag, its there for a reason, plus, it isn't hard, already have alot stuff in the works, and its getting situated fast.

8948972
True, but how will you cross-over into other worlds without power differences being an issue?

8948982
If power difference is an issue, then, I simply make it quick right here to say, there will always be someone stronger than the next in line, whether you do something stupidly overpowered, to something incredibly weak, its like this, for example, Martial artist, beats a boxer, someone with a sword, beats the martial artist, then someone with a gun beats the guy with the sword, its the aspect that even if he becomes super op, theres going to be someone or something out there, that will be created, that can put the scare into him, whether its created by me or someone else, therein lies our problem, people, specifically, alot of people, dont try to strive in making a character, that other authors look at and think 'Hey, I wanna one-up that.' Therefore, its where no one wants to play king of the hill and authors consistently skirt around it.

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But thats just how I see it, if you dislike the story, the idea, want to give me critiscism, sure, but, if you want to shame me for making an all powerful character, then all right, I can't blame you, with your freedom to say what you wish, but, that also means I don't have to sit back and give into other peoples logic or demands, to which, I am not saying you did any of these things, your just kind coming in a little too hasty for me.

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Nah, I honestly didn't know the character was op untill someone said it. Besides 'God' is only a title, it means nothing if their capable of dying or bleeding. Also, sorry if I came a little hasty, its just someone buying alot of stuff from the merchant is an idea i've seen too many do, I honestly like it more if people go by a 'One character, One displaced' rule and get everything else via cross-overs with others within reason. Besides, I can't really judge your OP character considering I have an one of my own in the works named Tsunami, his story isn't readddy yet hasn't been posted but he has crossed-over before with a certain op alicorn.

Behind his shoulder, raise two dragon skulls, with glowing sockets, his own eyes turning black, before his left eyes iris, turned gold.

OMNI:Funny thing is I was listening to "Megalo Strike back" while reading this...

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I don't really think there is something more powerful then blacklight. I mean think about it, you are immortal, you can't die because you regenerate from the virus even if your body is completely gone and you can absorb the DNA of anything and get their abilities, from that you can just kick in evolution and become invincible. There is a kind of magic that kills you with a touch? Continue to evolve until you are immune, repeat for everything else and conquer the world. Then using the mass of that planet go into space and attack other planets until the entire universe is a web of biomass.

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Trust me, you will see, and it will be magnificent.

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You better! Hahahahaha:pinkiehappy:

I will be waiting........

I will keep an EYE on you......

So keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

So they attacked him because he looked scary? Meh equestrians are a skittish and speciest society, makes enough sense

I think I can see the next chapter already.

*clearing throat*

SPIKE WANTS!!!

I ran the other way, behind me, the guards shouting for me to halt, while chasing me with spears. Bursting from a hedge, I see a cliff, welp, time to skiddadle skidoodle, flying right over the edge, I use my power over randomness to save me from my fall.

everyone get ready for some gringe SKIDAADLE SKADOODLE your dick is now a noodle!

Prepare to be struck down heathen!" Luna yelled.

*starts mumbling about reclaiming a certain HOLY LAND for the pope*

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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