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Lord Krahtorra


Making a game, writing a book, doing a screenplay, writing a fanfic, nothing is beneath this pleb!

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Will it be good? Let us see!

Before I read, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?

7826479 being careful, my mage is a necromancer, after all

7826483 What is a necromancer ?

7826494 Person who controls/talks to the dead

7826508 he also has druid powers, er... look up necromancer and druid descriptions, I'm prolly not doing it justice

I like it, it gives me that nice warm burning sensation :pinkiecrazy:

I really loved the beginning, but I gradually lost interest, then regained it. It's a great story so far, has a really good concept and I'm going to give it a thumbs up.

I donโ€™t think sheโ€™s gonna leaf us alone

... A single tear just rolled down my cheek. I have a new found respect for you, sir... Or lord.

Hilarious. Absolutely brilliant! Couldn't stop laughing every five minutes.

7980546 Thank you, please, spread the word! I thrive on these positive comments!

I love it lol. I can't wait to see the next chapter! And I love how luna reacted to him.

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lost contact with my other writer friends, working on getting it done

is Celestia a idiot to blame humans in her world for a Nader world and who is good and bad?

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One of the strongest powers yet๐Ÿ˜‘

I let marrow fly from my shoulder and let my first ward drop, the darkness around me growing deeper, the room grew colder and the plants grew more sinister in appearance. I looked to her as my eyes glowed with power. โ€œI have never been anything but kind to your subjects, madame.โ€ I said with venom in my voice as I called upon the spirits of my ancestors, spectral warriors forming from the darkness. I mentally commanded them to hold her still as she struggled against them. โ€œI have faced persecution for my magic, my clan, even my friendships, but never have I been so slighted as to be judged for something so out of my control as my very species.โ€ I leveled my staff as a scythe blade formed from itโ€™s crook. โ€œI am Liam Boresti, last of my clan, last of my people, and I have come here for naught but a peaceful life! But youโ€ฆ YOU DARE PERSECUTE ME FOR THE CRIMES OF ANOTHER?!โ€ I then ran at her, swiping her spells to either side as I slammed the back of my scythe against her head, slamming her into the ground. I then called Marrow and let him join with me, wings of bone and shadow forming from my back as I looked to her in disgust. โ€œI am leaving now, you miserable waste of mana. I am not going to harm your subjects. But If I find your soldiers hunting me, they shall know the meaning of fear.โ€ As she fell to the ground, I frowned and healed any otherwise permanent damage, and flew off towards what I remember being told was the Everfree forest. As I landed in a small glade, I then laid back against a tree as I grew a bramble around me, hiding myself as I began to slumber.

... Hell Yeah๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ great one and interesting story.

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