• Published 28th Dec 2017
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The Beginning - TheDragonSage



Naruto and sasuke after failing to save the world, with everything, but still managed to seal away kagyua away for good, but in the process became immortal and recreated the world

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Rewrite

Sorry if I didn’t write any new chapters, I was busy with my education along with because of the season 8 and new creatures and story lines I wanted to basically rewrite the story like for example,

Kirins, I would imagine sasuke making those, along with so many others things, and I am not sure about certain things with the story, just don’t expect me to continue this, so see you next time in a rewrite

Author's Note:

Sorry if some of you are frustrated :twilightsheepish:

Comments ( 13 )

will you have them interact more with their creations in the rewrite in this one the only time something happened was when sauske met with luna during the fight with nightmare like maybe have them take a vacation with their creations or something and the ponies try to adapt to having their literal creators in the same area as them

Well I will change some things up, like instead of straight up recreating the place right away, they will go to a empty space in the void where I am planning them to meet someone, not someone from naruto mind you, someone in mlp universe,...well not technically, but still there

Some lines were cringy so some places will change and as for the other questions haven’t decided yet

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when will you create this and what's it name??? if you don't mind

The name will stay the same with a added rearite

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When can we expect the rewright?

Comment posted by TheDragonSage deleted Jun 8th, 2019

Well I plan to make a rewrite after season nine, so that any new things like Grogar don’t surprise me, but I do have a idea I want to try out

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Is the rewrite still planned? I understand certain things like a loss of interest (such things have happened to me before), but regardless, it seems like the perfect time now that the show has finally concluded.

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Hmm perhaps, still a tons of things on my plate, corona, education, etc.,...there is maybe a chance I can send it on Sunday

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No worries - I'm not impatient, just making sure it is still planned in general.

I’ll be sure to read it.

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