Ares is a thirteen year old boy. His close family died, now he lives in a rich family who doesn't give to shits about him, and three abusive brothers. To avenge his close family, he became the smartest kid he can be. When he goes to this really good school, these murderous bullies mess with Ares, not pulling with his shit, he beat him up. He later went to his history class to turn in a message from the office. When he exits the class, there is five kids there to beat up him. One of the kids stabbed him. Ares later wakes up in the hall way. He turns into another body and kicks the living life out of the kids. Ahter he beat them up, His godfather (quite literly) sends him into another world.
Grammar.
Grammar.
Grammar.
Your story is cool but a little more of comedy and action would be nice.
Dark Tempest.
I know it needs more comedy and action. So in the end of Introducing David and Blue Blood, it says Griffon has sent a threat, which a war happens.
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Grammar*
Maybe he’s passive-aggressively suggesting you get an editor... since it’s nearly impossible to take an author seriously if they write like a grade-schooler?
Uh, Chronicler. NOBODY TAKES ME SRIOUS CAUSE I’M NEVER SERIOUS. But, you can be my editor if you want
And I am a grade schooler!
Good story
Is shining armor and blue blood girls
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Wow that fight is what my expectations are and reality is this...static.fjcdn.com/gifs/Expectations+vs+reality_10f12e_4439971.gif
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Srsly you responded to every chapter with the same comment
Yeah!!!!
7'2" 13 year old correct me if I'm wrong but a 7'2" 13 year old
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Not to mention a ricin covered knife.
Someones been watching to much Breaking Bad~
Sorry but this sucks. Grammar is the biggest thing here. And description.
Here, just for you.
“Technically, I’m a dick, because I’ve got a dick, you however, are a cunt, see what I’m getting at here?” I say sarcastically, with a shit eating grin upon my face.
Just reading the story description gives me an overly edgy and fatally cringeful feeling and judging by the comments and yours this is a story I want to avoid.
I NEED MORE
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7 foot 2 inches... He is 5 foot 2 inches.....