> The Beginning > by TheDragonSage > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- > Prologue > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Prologue Naruto and sasuke have just finishing their preparations for their project, after they managed to defeat Kagyua at the deaths of their team mates they came back seeing that the world was already dead. The sky lost its deep blue, the scorched land were covered in ash and fire, the nature chakra from what naruto is sensing, has dimmed down to the point it only produces oxygen they breathe, and even then, it hurt to inhale or was it that their lungs were damaged, but nevertheless they were the remaining humans that exist. For the next few days they wepted and mourned for their comrades, some time later , they successfully managed to separated the 9 tailed beasts from the 10 tails and freed them, what happened after words shocked naruto and sasuke to their very core, their bodies...were evolving. Sasuke’s right eye has turned to what was similar to his left, he received a pair of rinne-sharingans, while naruto’s hair has turned blood red, similar to that of his clan, and both of their bodies have completely turned to chakra, similar to the tailed beast, except their chakra bodies weren’t demonic but just that neutral like chakra, which makes that they were pretty much immortal, even if you somehow killed them they would simply reform once more like the biju (Tailed Beast). Then they were struck by a idea, since everything is dead, why not start all over, but not just any, they were going to make huge changes, first of, there isn’t going to be humans, as sad as it is, the humans species can easily be swayed to darkness, almost too easily, plus it brings too many memories up. So they started thinking of creatures they can make by combining the yin/yang seal on their palms to use, the creation of all things technique, by using yin seal to bring a illusion to the physical realm and using yang to breathe life into, this technique could literally make your dreams come true, in fact the tailed beast were created by the sage of six paths utilizing this technique long ago. They have come upon on books of legends and myths like Phoenix, Dragons, Manticores, Unicorns, Pegasus, Timber Wolves, they stopped shortly when naruto rudely interrupted him saying why not add these myth since they have similar and very liked aspect, for the next hour they basically sorted out things, the main races would be intelligent, powerful, and sentient, for example. The Pony Race, they are separated into 4 groups, Pegasus, Unicorns, Earth Pony, and most powerful Alicorns, the Pegasus, winged ponies with the power to control the weather and fly, Unicorns, horned ponies with the power to magic, a new source of energy that will be explained later on, Earth Ponies, ordinary horses with unnatural amounts of strength, and finally the Alicorns, a pony with the combination of all three former with skills greatly enhanced, these powerful pony naruto and sasuke created, they soon realized that the alicorns were simply over powered, so they lowered their birth rate, and if necessary they made a spell intended in making artificial alicorns but that was only in emergency’s, and if the alicorn uses the spell for bad intent, the spell would backfire and turn them into a earthpony, naruto and sasuke disconnected the natural movement of the sun and moon and made it that it required magic to be moved, and weather had to be made except some things like windigos with the ability to cause blizzards. Now the reason they created this race, basically naruto wanted them to learn to get along, to the point they were friends and hopefully manage to befriend other races. Next would be dragons, who could live up to hundreds to thousands years and grow from the size of a pony to a mountain, and ability to fly, they weren’t known for their intelligence, but for brute strength, immunity to fire and lava, with a ability to also breathe fire, and most have wings, giving them flight, they were mostly aggressive of what was theirs like territory, but had increasable amount of loyalty. Now the reason they created Dragons is to show prime examples of loyalty, and to see if he over races can follow. Changlings, bug-like ponies with a ability to use magic, transformation, and to eat love to grow stronger, they act a lot like bugs, example being bees, never ending hunger, build structure with their liquids like cacoons, with the queen being the most powerful. The reason they made this race, was not what they were, but what they could become, if they could learn to share love, instead of taking, they would be able to get rid of the never ending hunger and physically change. Griffins,half lion and half eagle, are mostly greedy, but have a strong sense of honor, they as intelligent as ponies and are mostly faster than Pegasus in flight though a Pegasus has potential to be faster, and have a love for gold. The reason they made this one, was to teach honor, and believed the griffins can learn to trust in each other. And finally draconequus, even more rarer than alicorns, but possibly the most powerful, with the ability to control space and bend reality, in other words, creates chaos, they mostly have naruto’s pranking personality and humor, he also gave them a body the seemed to be a compilation of multiple animals. He made this tribe to teach other humor and hoped that it would teach draconequus self control. There were of course muiltiple species like pheonixs’, minatours, centaurs, zebras, manticore, and hundreds more, and of course with their own means of defense, centaurs with the ability to suck magic, zebras vast knowledge of medical and potions, pheonixs ability to be reborn through fire, Minotaurs incredible physical build, and much much more for the other races to discover. A few months have past and they have made progress, the pony’s seemed to have a affair with their differences, but seemed to rely on each other for different things as in food, changing cycle of day and night, and the weather, dragons seemed to established a ruler called known as the DragonLord, griffins right now dont seem to trust each other, the Changlings, mostly have a working system like a hive and seem to tolerate each other. Finally draconequus seem to have made home in a forest having,and to those unfortunate enough to enter were pranked until they ran out, and unlike the other races, draconicus are basically a family of pranksters who prank each other or enter their territory’s and have fun. Until then the tailed beast were asleep before they started even started,they had to recollect their chakra fro the war and to mostly rest, probably with the amount they used, they would be asleep for hundreds of years. The tailed beast origins to those who don’t know were once a tree called shinju before they had chakra, every thousand years the tree would produce a fruit called chakra fruit, one time when the war ended for their era, in celebrations, a woman by the name kagyua broke the tradition, to not eat the fruit and took a bite and became the first person to use chakra. Many years later she gave birth to two kids one bearing the byukugan, (don’t know what it is search it up) while the second gained the rinnegan , the tree sensing its chakra was enraged, started to change although slowly, kagyua realizing the danger and told her children, since she couldn’t do it since all she would be doing is giving it strength. For many years the two chakra users have trained, that they were considered gods as of then, and when it was time to fight, they found out who was their opponent, the ten tails, they clashed, after many minutes to hours to days they fought, they did their final ace in the sleeve, sealing jutsu, and that was how the one with the rinnegan became the first jinchuriki which means ‘power of the human sacrifice’. Now your probably wondering why were the people that caries tailed beasts called that, because once they became jinchuriki, they were no longer considered human and they were treated as if hey were the demon themselves. Though they managed to only seal the soul and chakra, but the body was left behind, when kagyua came in contacted with the body she slowly started to lose her mind and basically go mad, with they sealed her and the body of the ten tails away, while using her chakra to give to the people, now your wondering where they were sealed, well with the rinnegans, with one of its ability’s to control gravity, they used kagyua and the body as the core of a growing ball of earth and thrown into space which is now known as the moon. Though of course, before they created these creatures, they made sure a few things happened, they separated chakra to be physical and mental and just that, they made it that in order to create this new energy source, they had to collect the nature surrounding the land and combining it with their mental aspect making their magic grow in the physical realm, (so basically sorta like fairy tail with the erthonano) the races before splitting up,with of course, meeting them and were told of their history the tailed beast were sought out and built temples surrounding them in different locations. > Chapter 1 The Shining Moon > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- CHAPTER 1 - The Shining Moon -prologue- Tonight, for some reason wasn't right, for some strange reason, the dark sky and stars seemed to be losing its beauty, they looked dull, as if someone was taking the light out of them, sasuke didn't like it, in fact the only time he ever remembered something like this, was before when alicorns weren't in control of the sun and moon, back before equestria didn't exist, all the way back till the pony tribes era, back when a group of unicorns had to do the job. Over the years, naruto and him, have been told to fillies and colts about their tale as a story, which turned into history, which became legends, then believed to be nothing more than myths, to the point no one really remembers them, during these times, which they earned the names yin yang deitys, a force thats impossible to exist without the other. Naruto was a bright light while he was the swallowing darkness, naruto was the scorching sun while he was the cool moon, naruto, his only best friend and rival, was the physical yang with abilities of healing and large chakra supply, while he was the spiritual yin with abilities of illusion and chakra control, while naruto took time to assemble his sealing art, he took time to work on time/space art. Over the years many things happened, both times were happy, upset, or straight up furious, the Alicorns and Draconequus have been to war simply because one side believed them to be too uptight and serious while the other claimed that they messing up the balance. It was to the point that there was only survivors to this war were celestia and baby luna that were left to fend for themselves, same for a certain draconequus, though he didn't have anyone, the animals would run and the other races were either too scared or would just laugh, this scenario was just too much like naruto, except this one comes from a family of chaos magic users and didn’t have a demon in him. Now here comes the better part, the ponies have finally put aside their differences and united under a banner of the two last Alicorns, they all became friendly with each other, though he could feel increasingly amout of jealousy, and even then sasuke didn’t want to intervene with history. The griffins have improved themselves, to the point where they have established one of the griffins to be their King. The Changlings would start trying to steal as much love as possible, looks like naruto’s hope that they learned to share has certainly failed. And what happened next certainly peeked his interest, before starswirl the bearded and the other pillars were sent to limbo with the pony of shadows, they planted a seed in a place where still had the slightest amout of chakra, the everfree forest. From there the seed grew to the point it was then called the tree of harmony, which created instead of fruits, but six elemental stones that could rival even the 5 treasure tools of the sage of six paths. He was sad to see that one of only Alicorns has turned to darkness out of jealousy, and was banished to the moon, which sasuke thought that was ironic, it seemed as if people enjoyed making the moon a prison. Then he decided, it was enough, when nightmare moon returned, he and naruto would also return, he told naruto of this and he agreed, this was enough hiding, its time to out in the open. -prologue end- -Thousand years later- “Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there were two regal sisters who ruled together, and created harmony for all the land. To do this, the eldest used her unicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn; the younger brought out the moon to begin the night. Thus, the two sisters maintained balance for the kingdom and their subjects, all the different types of ponies. But as time went on, the younger sister became resentful. The ponies relished and played in the day her elder sister brought forth, but shunned and slept through her beautiful night. One fateful day, the younger unicorn refused to lower the moon to make way for the dawn. The elder sister tried to reason with her, but the bitterness in the young one's heart had transformed her into a wicked mare of darkness: Nightmare Moon. She vowed that she would shroud the land in eternal night. Reluctantly, the elder sister harnessed the most powerful magic known to ponydom: the Elements of Harmony. Using the magic of the Elements of Harmony, she defeated her younger sister, and banished her permanently in the moon. But permanently was not what Nightmare Moon had in mind. Before her defeat, she announced that one day she will return, along with her conquest for eternal night. The elder sister however had a prophecy of her own. When Nightmare Moon returns one mysterious pony will use the powers of harmony and will be powerful enough to defeat Nightmare Moon once and for all and restore peace and harmony to the land once more. At the mean time, the elder sister took on responsibility for both sun and moon and harmony has been maintained in Equestria for generations to come”. It started out in the voice of sasuke, which turned to naruto’s and the last line turned into a voice of a violet pony, with purple eyes, even darker shade of purple and pink, and mostly bluish purple Mann’s and tail, who was laying by a tree in the grass, she laid there thinging, she looked up to the sky and said out loud,“elements of harmony,...where have I heard that before,”. (Theme songs) Twilight walked along one of the roads of cantorlot to get to the tower that was given to her, a place to live, by her mentor, princess celestia, the pony that raises and lowers the sun and moon, the pony that taught her everything's she knew. As of now, she's going to her tower, to search where she heard of the “Elements of Harmony,” however, on her way to the tower, She was approached by three Unicorns, the one was a white with pink mane, other was blue with white and darker blue mane, and last one was yellow and had turquoise mane. “Here you are twilight, moondancer is having a little get together at west castle courtyard, so you wanna come,” said the white unicorn, while all three leaned forward at he last bit. Twilight, who had social skills of a rock, politely said,“sorry girls, I would love to, but I have a lot of studying to do, so bye,” she smiled and ran past them, the trio watch her go while the white unicorn turned to the hello one and said,“does she do anything that isn’t study,” she rhetorically asked, while simultaneously answered it,”I think she is more interested in books than friends,” they turned Andrey ran. If twilight heard them she didn’t show it, still running she asked herself,”elements of harmony, I know I heard of it somewhere,” she last by a few ponies, completely ignoring them, when they waved. She ran to the tower that she lived in, while inside spike, a baby purple dragon, with a present in his claws, started heading to the door to head to moondancer’s party, all of he sudden, twilight slammed the door open hitting spike in the process. ”spike, spi~ke, spike,” called out twilight with the third call looking at spike, the one in question sat up holding his head, while the present he had somehow got stuck to his tail. Twilight, who already made sure he was ok, went to the book selves and telling him,“quick, find me the book about predictions and prophecies,” twilight notices the gift on his tell, and curiously asks him,“whose that for,” spike finally notices the present, impaled to his tail, take it off and said,“it was a gift to moondancer, but now,” on that moment a ripped off teddy bear fell to the floor. ”oh spike, you know we don’t have time for this sort of things,” said twilight, while knocking books off from a pile. “But were on a break,” Spike pointed out, twilight who didn’t answer simply started using her magic and pulled several books from her shelve, each time when she saw the title. “It’s right here,” called out spike from the ladder on the shelve holding out a book, twilight using her magic, pulled the book along with spike, to her while she read the title, and looked satisfied, in it she read out the elements of harmony and the prophecy of how she would return on the the longest day in a thousand years. Immediately she told spike to right a letter to the princess saying, she after a minute received a letter stating that she must stop reading those dusty books and gave her a task to go to Ponyville to check the preparations. While they were traveling to Ponyville via chariot pulled by the royal pegasus guards in the pocket dimension built by the yin yangs, by utilizing the technique called telescope jutsu (which is basically a crystal ball that was used by the third hokage ). Naruto was laughing his butt off when the princess told her student about the dusty books, but that wasn’t the cause of his laughter, it was her face when he heard the comment. Sasuke simply rolled his eyes at naruto, they continued watching from her in the farm to the nightmare moon, while both crying, what went wrong when pinky sang. But sasuke and naruto both knew that the elements will help cleanse the physical side of Luna, but as for the mental side, the elements can do so much, so sasuke decided to assist her by going to Luna mindscape. In Luna’s mind The good thing, in sasuke’s opinion is that the minescape no matter how much time passes, hundreds of hours could pass and it would still be a second in reality. And that is a very good thing, because ever since the nightmare took control of Luna this place became like a maze where Luna is trapped and her magic being taken. After a while he made it to the middle and found a blue alicorn crying on the floor surrounded by darkness, with the sand floor as the floor. Sasuke sighed, not happy at the sight, he walked over to her, and knelt down, he sat there for a second until he placed a hand on her shoulder. Luna’s perspective Luna was crying, for how long, she couldn’t say, it felt like years since, she could remember when she had control of her body, she blamed herself of what she almost did to celestia. Then, she felt something on her shoulder, she was so surprised she stopped crying for a second, she turned to her visited, and widened her eyes. It was something she never saw before, it had pale skin, no hair except his black mane, no tail whatsoever, he seemed to be bipedal, judging from his body structure. Its eyes, were propably, the most terrifying and fascinating things she saw, they were all purple with rings surrounding the pupil, and by his smell and figure, it was a he. Then she saw in his palm was a picture of a moon, now she was confuse why would he have that mark, she didn’t think it was a cutie mark simply because it’s not on his plank, and he is not a pony. then she remembered something, in books of legends, it also meant, yin, YIN, this guy was YIN, one of the two gods that created the world, the dark side, master of illusions, healer of minds. “you know, i never was one for conforting, that is usually naruto’s job, but specifically wanted to meet you, i know you regret everything you did to celestia, and even now they have cleansed your physical taint, but tell me, are you ready to go back, because i can help you with that,” he spoke, luna’s eyes widened, in a quiet voice she asked,”is this true,” sasuke smiled and nodded, with her question answered, he placed his hand on her forehead and felt his mark on his palm shine, she could see how the darkness and the maze disappearing into ablivion. “luna could feel how she was being pulled out of her mind, before she went, she faced Yin, and said,”thank you, Yin,”, after her heard his title, he chuckled and said,” call me sasuke,”. > Chapter 2 ~ The Ticket > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2 ~ The Ticket *In The Kamui Dimension* “Well, did it go well,” asked naruto, and Yang side of the sage of six paths, sasuke turned to face him him, and saw him smirking, while sitting on a chair that seemed to appear in thin air. Though of course, he knew the reason, him and naruto have been using the technique, ‘creation of all things’ so many times, that it became natural and the fact they share the same mindscpape with the tailed beasts, that it was connected between the 11 of them. Now he didn’t gain the power to use any of the tailed beast mode and naruto didn’t gain a rinnegan, but they could things that they couldn’t before, for example if they work hard enough, kurama may gain the ability to cover himself in his susanoo and sasuke would get more chakra and unlock chakra affinities. The Kamui Dimension, a place that once been a place filled with blocks as floors, but changed it as a everlasting field of grassland, though it didn’t have a sun, so they made it look like a night sky, that somehow creates enough light like the street lights. “It was nice, although, fully enjoyed the look on her face, when she realized who she was talking to,” sasuke answered, truthfully, he indeed did enjoy blowing her mind, she might be a thousand year old, but to him she may as well be a foal. “Powerful are they, the bearers of the elements of harmony, it seems starswirl the bearded’s tree of harmony’s elements, are indeed as powerful as we and him hoped,” naruto said, smiling with his eyes closed, though when opened them, they had a deadpan stare and mumbled,” I still wish you never gave those advance theory spells, I mean, he literally created a time traveling spell,”. Sasuke chuckled, and spoke,” Well it does seem something you would do, but i decided that he deserved them, he has never made a very poor decision once, and i haven’t regretted it since then,”. Naruto sighed, he didn’t want to intervene with the races, only in a very dire need, allowing starswhirl to see you and give him, something potentially disastrous, was not necessary. Naruto groaned, but soon after heard a noise in the crystal ball they used for the telescope jutsu, they found that twilight and spike recieved a invitation and two tickets to the Great Galloping Gala. Soon enough applejack, who twilight was helping collecting the apples this morning, and rainbowdash who just woke from a nap in a tree they just past. They both wanted the ticket for different purposes, applejack wanted to sell her apples in the gala to gain money to rebuild, replace, or fix some things in the farm. Rainbowdash wanted it because she said it might be her only chance to meet and join the wonderbolts, her biggest dream. Both the last humans chuckled, knowing that no one in the nobility exept a handful of ponies would buy her products and the wonderbolts would be incredible busy with the fans that they would have no time for her. Twilight already telling them that she would decide over lunch, but she was rammed into pinkie pie on her way to the restaurant, and when she sees the tickets, she immediately starts singing about how the Galla was the greatest party like a carnival. Once again they knew that the Galla they knew and the one she was thinking were two very different things. And then rarity, who was asking what was going on, with pinkie telling her about the tickets, which then rarity goes telling twilight of the ‘true love’ with the adopted prince that they could have, which they already knew was a snot-nosed brat. Both sasuke and naruto deadpanned at how rarity acted like Sakura when she was useless with the romance and how perfect it will be. Which led up to angel picking up the ticket and taking it to fluttershy, which she asks her if she can go, to see the animals in the garden, which again were shy as crap. Which led to finding out rainbowdash was following twilight and applejack following rainbowdash which went into a big argument, and twilight shouting to be quiet. They both were roaring in laughter when they heard pinkie talk about a guy and oat meal, they almost cried in laughter. They listened as twilight explained that she will not make a decision over a empty stomache, when they went to eat, with twilight talking about who to give the ticket to. The rainstorm happened, and it seemed rainbowdash was trying to earn a extra favor by making a hole in the sky for twilight, which she asked to close. But when she did her mane and food were ruined, they once again laughed historically, then came rarity with her umbrella, which then twilight left, then led to applejack offering her food, which went to fluttershy cleaning her house, with a eschew that its spring cleaning, which landed with pinkie pie singing that twilight was her best friend which landed with pinkie telling he village of the Galla ticket. The two who were watching were dieing,... in laughter it all ended when twilight teleported into be house, with the 5 in there. They then apologized, which made twilight take the tickets back to celestia via dragon mail style with a friendship lesson, which in return they received with more tickets, saying why didn’t she say so, which they suspected her doing that on purpose for the fun of it. They shared a good laugh with the show they were watching, “oh that was fantastic,” exclaimed naruto, with joy in his eyes. Sasuke nodded fully agreeing with him, the last time they laughed like that was when the chaos using species was turned to stone, which sasuke will admit was hilarious. Which speaking of discord, they could sense he’s close to being released, with how he just needed a bit of disharmony. > Chapter 3 ~ To the Gala > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3 Kamui Dimension Naruto was booooored, he and sasuke have been sitting in this dimension for so long that they have already forgotten what fresh air smelled like, and the time sasuke left to luna’s mind didn’t count. It was the same grassland with him sitting on a chair by a table, on top of the table is a crystal ball used to look up and check the element barriers. Though sasuke didn’t seem to care, he was meditating to get a better control of his chakra, even though it is already insanely good at it. He doesn’t even know who to prank, which is what he used to do when he was bored back in the academy days, and what worse is when the BIJUs (1) have already restored their chakra energys’, they were simply just being lazy. He and his brother in all but blood, have watched the six ponies in interest, interesting things from applejacks stubbornness of harvesting apples to strange ones like seeing the pinkie sense to even the most hilarious ones like when they ran into the poison jokes. Sasuke sighed, being reminded at how annoyed he was back when naruto created those plants, it was supposed to be just for jokes, until the red haired Dobe (2) decided it would be an actual plant. Naruto was at this point been playing a game with his knife, he essentially was stabbing the wood on the table inbetween the fingers of his hand, if he won, none of his fingers get hurt, if lost...well he has a healing ability. Though now naruto was watching twilight looking for a spell to turn a apple into a carriage, all the of the six and the dragon were getting ready going to the gala. His eyes widened, his mout forming a smirk, he took a breath and yelled,“sasuke get ready,” his long time teammate looked at him from across the land, which is basically a 25 feet away, under a tree. “What is it,” sasuke questioned, with a bit of curiousity in his voice, he was honestly been waiting when a idea in naruto would appear, though now in the look into his teammates eyes, he wasn’t so sure now. Naruto giggled. Now that freaked the absolute crap out of sasuke, naruto in all of the times sasuke can remember, naruto NEVER, NEVER ONCE IN IS LIFE, giggled. “Why not go to the gala ourselves, it would be easy, just create a ticket, disguise ourselves and go right in, but nooo, we are going to prank every single noble in the castle, not even the princesses will be spared,”. Sasuke deadpanned at him, this was by far taking it much, oh he knew that naruto can do it, but he had hoped beyond belief that naruto was done with pranking. He sighed, he guessed naruto will probably will never change, but now that he thought about it, it would be nice to see their reactions, both naruto and sasuke had a sadistic smirks on their faces. There were shadows covering half of the face, which is the upper part, with naruto and sasuke both showing glowing red eyes. At The Galla They were in, they both managed to find a home of a noble, with sasuke performing a jutsu to give him fake memories at being in the Galla, taking their forms and tickets, and went straight to the Galla. When they arrived, by the gates, they were excited with what they planned, of course the party itself was incredibly boring, but they were planning to prank all night, and almost crossed the bridge until they heard music in the distance. *After the song* Both the gods were deapanning throughout the song,...seriously where did their creations go wrong, he was pretty sure nether sasuke or him made them have a singing where ever, whenever you are ready song. 1) tailed beasts 2)deadlast or idiot (like Baka) > Chapter 4 ~ The Best Night Ever > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 4 ~ The Best Night Ever *Canterlot Castle* Sasuke and naruto both continued to deadpan, why...where had they gone wrong, he made sure to make this race to be like normal people, and they knew for sure there wasn’t anyone in their past sing out randomly...right? They looked calm now, but inside sasuke’s eyes were twitching and naruto was anime crying, they watched as the main six have entered the building before they split, leaving behind a sad dragon. They were now coming Inside, naruto also for some reason decided to create a fake history of them being nobles. They have already transformed into the nobles they have been disguised as, it used to be just a simple illusion, well for sasuke, naruto, for some reason because he had so much chakra he managed to to be able to shape shift, which sasuke also gained over time since their chakra continuously grows. They have also created themselves a artificial bodies to possess like a puppet, similar like Kankuro did with his puppets, though as of now they weren’t using it. Naruto’s disguise was simply him orange skin, sun kissed blonde mane and tail, him having sapphire eyes, he decided to remove the whiskers since that would attract attention, which at the end gave himself a cutie mark picture of a Yang symbol of the yin and yang. (basically the yang, white piece of the yin yang symbol) Sasuke’s was basically the dark version, indigo skin, very similar to luna’s, raven black mane and tail, charcoal black eyes, which also had to hide his rinnegan through contact glance, and finally to complete the look added the yin cutie mark, opposite of his rival. They have already climbing the stair to the princess of the sun, and both of them twitching when HEARING what sounded like ANOTHER SONG. Naruto sees all these ponies shaking hoofs with celestia and one of the main six, twilight sparkle, he couldn’t help but deadpan, wasn’t she able to able to talk through letters, via dragon breath, she wanted to spend her night, doing the same thing only in person. And decided to have some fun, and put on the same smile that all nobles seemed to have, once his hoof was in contact with twilight, shake her hoof as if my life depended on it. (You see what I did there >:))( if you didn’t, just go watch season one final episode and during pinkie’s song, watch twilight.) Naruto on he outside looked calm with a smile in his face, but on the inside he was dieibg it laughter, the look on her eyes and her hoof pulsing was hilarious. On sasuke side, he was being busy by talking to the nobles, one colt asked,“so far I think this gala was one of the best, don’t you agree”. Sasuke in truth didn’t care about it, but to be polite he answered,”I agree, the music is extraordinary, and the food is simply define,”. The ponies around him all nodded their heads accepting his answer, he was enjoying the gala, though not this way of he noble but because of the main six, he chuckled when he continued. Naruto who had already set up the traps for his prank that rivaled the day he became Genin, the day where people have roared in anger, wept in tears, and sat in depression. He has found a place that primarily seller donuts, and found a certain purple dragon, deciding to see what the problem was sat next to him and ordered a donut. Which after a minute turned to him and asked,” is anything wrong,” spike turning to him saw a blue unicorn (remember this is a noble disguised not their decided horse forms) turning back he sighed and said,”I was hoping tonight I would be able to spent time with my friends, but they all have something they all decided to do,”. Naruto blinked, is that all, I mean sure that would be unfortunate, but not enough to get depressed over, he chuckled and said,” well if that is a problem why don’t you go see what they are doing, some say this could be one of the worst parties ever while some one of the best,”. Spike looked at him, confused, wasn’t this known to be the best party in equastria, he was about to question him, when he once again woke up from his gaze he realized he was gone.( IK how “original”) After what was supposed to be midnight the duo left, though sasuke was confused and voiced his opinion,”I though you were gonna do your pranks,” naruto simply smirked and counted backwards from ten, when it repacked one, it was midnight and all chaos unwrapped. Ever single ponies that naruto encountered or bumped, which is everyone, or everpony, has been covered in glue and feathers, and all of a sudden all the guards were covered in itching powder, and because they were not allowed to move, they were basically stuck with itches everwhere. And the castle was covered in waxed flooring so everyone there was slipping like a wet soap, all sasuke did was shake his head, he would never understand naruto’s love for pranks, perhaps it’s a Uzumaki gene, though Karin never did those things, perhaps she had discipline. Uhhhhh whyyyyyy > Chapter 5 ~ The prank war > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 5 ~ the prank war In canterlot garden, they was a group of ponies from ponyville visiting the statues of the said garden, there was a about a dozen, most being fillies, miss cheerlily, (I think that’s her name) has already explained the statues of three ponies in a jumping or are jumping representing friendship. “And this represents victory,” she continued, in her matter of fact voice, which the megenta colored pony had a smile. The cutie mark crusaders, the trio that seek the secrets of finding the over glorified butt tattoo that tells you what you would and always do, forever. But as of today they seemed to be annoyed, and frustrated, for plot convenience for freeing a being to basically to match sun and moon princesses. “How cool would it be to have that as a cutie mark,” exclaimed scootaloo, with talents obviously in her scooter, looking at a stone pony standing on her/his hind legs holding a stick with a real flag on. “Cooool, if you were actually victororiasm, (I honestly don’t know where she was going on that one),” said apple bloom back, rolling her eyes, and grinned smugly in her face. “That’s not a word,” whines sweety bell, pretty much annoyed with her since she pretty much was used to hearing perfect Grammer from rarity. “What are you, a dictionary?” Scootaloo asked/sacasmed, tilting her head at the oblivious unicorn who was stupid enough not to realize she sings better than normal. “Girls,” the teacher called out, as the trio finally took notice they were far behind, as they ran up, she continued asking,” now class what can you see about this particular statue,”. The screen zoomed , at the statue that seemed to be singing in the opera, which was actually him laughing, when she asked that question, the trio took it to answer to the class. “It’s got an eagle claw,” “a lion’s paw,” “and a snake tail,” one by one apple bloom started, scootaloo got in front and for some reason sweety bell defied physics and hovered like a bird in the air, flapping her hoods rapidly. “This creature is called a Draconiques, he has a head of a pony and a body of all sorts of things, what do you suppose this represents” cheerily said, ignoring the lack of physics, and continued on the lesson. “Confusion,” “evil,” “chaos,” apple bloom, sweety bell, and scootaloo said, in that respectable order. “It’s not chaos you dodo,” sweetie ball said, which unknownly has basically called her a chicken. “Don’t call me you I don’t the the meaning of, and of course it’s chaos(wow spot on) ,” she called back, now looking at her. “Is too,” she returned, now they pressing their nose at each other, apple bloom decided she was superior than both and jumped on their heads like a noble pony, and said,” their both wrong,” and immediately started fighting. While they were doing the classic cartoon fighting no one noticed magic being collected in the chest of the said statue. The teacher of the class shook her head and said,” in a way your all right (not left) this statue represents discord (you would think he would be in history books) which means disharmary between pony’s, in fact you three did such a good job showing that each of you have to right me an essay explaining it, now come and I don’t want anymore fighting. The joy in their faces was smashed into a million pieces and burned, and afterwards and when following along the path started arguing, unknowingly freeing a thousand year old trapped goat head to doom equestria with Cotten candy could and chocolate rain. Next thing you see is the village full of ponies named, uncreatively ponyVille ( T_T really), rainbowdash was flying across ponyville when out of nowhere a pink cloud raced past her, rainbowdash stopped for a second and raced to the cloud. “Come back here you,” she yelled, before she got stuck, when she got out she shook herself like a dog, while saying ,”ewww” she took a lick on the pink substance and tasted it. “Cotten candy?,” she said, confused, when all of a sudden she was in a middle of pink Cotten candy clouds racing all over. When she looked up she saw a cloud, it let out a little of chocolate milk rain, “hey wait a minute, your not supposed to rain until tomorrow you can’t just,” and on that moment the cloud seemed to have decided to let out a heavy rain of chocolate. “-rain,” and the farm close by, apple jack collecting corn (corn? Weren’t they apple farmers? Anyway after this they will probably never see another fruit or vegetables. Applejack noticing the rain and rainbowdash,” rainbowdash what’s with the rain,” shakes her head, “ I mean chocolate milk,” another shake, “ I mean chocolate milk rain,”. Rainbowdash noticing a rb hearing applejack come close to her and explains, “ I don’t know their all over equastria, right now cloudsdale is getting soaked over a cola storm right now, but don’t worry I got this,”. And left, to try to get rid of the clouds, while the floor was getting stuffed with popcorn, all of it getting popped by the rain. Rarity who was wearing a purple coat with a saddle with an umbrella on it. “Good evening applejack, I heard there was a camosion today and came to see if I can help,...that doesn’t evolve me getting wet, or dirty, or out of my umbrella. All of a sudden the apples grew ten times their size, and animals began eating it, more than their size they were eating. When fluttershy tried to make the animals stopped eating applejack profit, they all of a sudden grew giraffe legs. And even when twilight tried to use the failsafe spell (for what?) it failed. They created a plan where rainbowdash rounds up all the clouds, applejack pulls it in to the ground, and animals eat it. It was then that a letter that spike burped up from princess celestia told them to come immediately. And in it, it detailed a message from the princess of the sun, princess celestia, after traveling to equastria via train, which thankfully didn’t have any strange phenomenons happening to it. When they arrived they barged into the room where the princess was, twilight immediately started asking what was going and why was her magic not working until celestia stopped her. As they walked the hallway, she spoke, ”I’m glad that you all came this soon, it seems a foe that once that me and my sister had fought is back again-,” she said in a voice not heard that commonly. Fluttershy was walking around the windows of the hallway before she stumbled upon a window in particular that had a creature that spooked like a bad OC. “This creatures name is discord the spirit of chaos and disharmony, he used to rule equastria in a age of pain and suffering (I’m sorry if this is not how the words go, but I try to make it as similar as possible) before me and my sister (where is she?) stood up to him and turned him into stone,” she finished and rainbowdash congratulating her. She then proceeded with opening up the door that supposedly only she can open ( T_T celestia thought that she can keep the lord of chaos with a strength of a god, out?), she dropped the box when they realized the box was empty along with their jaws. And pinkie pie went to drink chocolate milk outside with a straw, with no absolute sadness in it. When she came back they heard laughter, (0_0 John delancy O.O why did you agree to do MLP?) “sense?, what fun is there in making sense,” in turn caused celestia to yell in rage to show himself. Discord simply chuckled and said,” didn’t you miss me, I missed you, and you know you wouldn’t know how it feels like to be turned to stone, when I never did it,” he animated the spirit on the window and sat and knocked on a window with a pony that strangely enough sounded like stone. “Enough, what did you do to the elements,” she raged on, why stomping her hoof on the ground or carpet. He went on as boring she was and explained the elements spirits strength and purpose, and gave them a riddle, but unknown to all they were being watched. Naruto POV Naruto couldn’t believe after a millennium of his favorite draconeques being in stone, was now free, he saw his chance. This man was his rival, at the art of pranksters and jokes, and one of the few people to be able to annoy sasuke as much as he can. He was now sitting on the ceiling watching all that was happening in amusement. In his golden hair motherless, yes you heard him right, yellow or gold hair, after most of his life having red hair, he realized he practically had nothing on his fathers side. So he fixed it, he gave himself his original hair color although he simply dyed it, he wouldn’t completely lose his red hair. Anyway, he has been waiting for a long time to challenge his fellow joker, to one of the most historical events, or at least to him... to a prank battle. Sasuke though the moment he realized that he was free immediately was annoyed and in a foul mood. He sincerely hoped that the spell will hold despite knowing that it will not. Naruto was inwardly laughing at what was happening, he was waiting for a challenge and excitement. Discord POV ‘All according to plan,’ were the thoughts of a certain chaos user, he just said good luck to the pony’s of the elements of harmony, it was all going fine and great until he felt a presence. He turned around fully going to ask them how they were here. When his eyes landed on the being behind him, his mouth dropped, ‘human’ there weren’t suppose to be humans and aren’t they simply stories, although a very boring story. It was then he noticed the yang sign of his on his palm, which meant he was... “Yang?!,” he yelled out, what the hell was the creator of the world doing here, he was now sweating up a storm. “Oh nothing i was simply bored so I decided something I’ve done before, I challenge you to a prank battle. > Rewrite > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry if I didn’t write any new chapters, I was busy with my education along with because of the season 8 and new creatures and story lines I wanted to basically rewrite the story like for example, Kirins, I would imagine sasuke making those, along with so many others things, and I am not sure about certain things with the story, just don’t expect me to continue this, so see you next time in a rewrite