When a blizzard hits Ponyville, Dash and Soarin, along with their three children. decide to share stories with each other such as when Dash and Soarin were foals, what the colts did at school their parents didn't know about, etc. This was supposed to be a one chapter, short story but it turned into a two or three chapter story. Hope you guys like it. (My other story is still being worked on) Let me know what you guys think.
LOVE IT!!!!
I LOVE IT TO!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!
I LOVED IT SOOOO MUCHπ
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Thank you! The next chapter will be out shortly
Too cute!
I'm definitely sticking around to see how this goes.
Its really good! I love it
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Thanks
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Glad you like it. Next chapter will be out shortly
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Thank you. Hope my next chapter doesn't disappoint
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Thanks you so much for that! As I said in the description this was supposed to be a one chapter story, I meant to put an authors note about them and completely forgot. I will fix that as soon as I post this. Again, thank you so much for reminding me, I'm terrible at imagining characters.
YAY!
Girl (or boy), This. IS. AMAZING! β€β€ππβ€ππππβ€β€πππππ
(Yeah, I love hearts)
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I'm a girl and thank you πβ€πβ€π
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You're welcomeπππ
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If you mean Piercing the Heavens, I love that story and this is for my other story but it explains I have Calm Winds Permission to use his setup and personalities. I was wondering if one of you guys would be surprised. Next chapter will be up soon
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It still shocks me some people don't read like that ~ Mintstar
Well, time to put this in tracking ~ Mintstar
HAHA MY OC
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Glad you liked it!! It was really fun to write and I'm so making another one!!
Okay there are 15 "there" in the first chapter and 5 of them are wrong. How does anyone with any sort of self respect or respect to her potential readers fucks up one third of their "there"-s? I'm really mesmerised by this level of negligence.
OMG i want another story like that!!! (sorry for bad English, i'm french)
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I'm currently working on one. Plus don't worry, I suck at English and I'm American.
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cool! haha x)
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if english isn't their first language..... idk if its not but still. Also if they have dyslexia then that could play into it. auto correct is your own worst enemy when it comes to grammar.
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I have a lot of sympathy for people who struggle with orthography. I do too. What I have no sympathy for, are people who don't realise it and/or don't ask for help.
If you make mistakes in comment, that doesn't matter, we all do. I make more than most. But in stories, you release for others to read and enjoy, you should have the self respect to ask for help editing it. If there was an editor, that puts the blame one step away from the author, but I doubt that.
Very nice to see Rainbow and Soarin' together.