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Soarin and Rainbow Dash have met several times before, but that's where the relationship ends. When the two ponies try to change that, each in very different ways, things don't exactly go as planned.
Story takes place right after season 4
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Sweet idea for a story. I hope you do regular updates. I'll give a more thorough review in a few chapters.
These are some of (would you call it shipping) romances stuff I can live with; when two ponies actually have some stuff in common......So far its a good story.....Hope to see more soon.....We'll see what we think in next chapter though.
I'll be keeping an eye on this.
Wowowowowo.... Calm down soarin...
Anyway, i'll leave you a thumbs up and i cant wait for more!
Yes, yes, I can tell.
More plwest?
Nice job. I wonder what happens next.
Mm Hmm.
(studying the story closely)
First story, huh?
I could guess
Meh.
Pls Continue it Soon I like this story very much
loved it and keep it up!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you! Glad that you enjoyed it
I just find it hilarious that both find the other stupid without realising the other finds them stupid. It's highly ironic and is making me laugh far more than is recommended. I can't wait to see how this plays out!
5434082 glad you're enjoying it! I have to admit, I laughed more than I should've while writing this...
5434082 In my opinion this has been used far too often, however , so far, I liked the story, anyway.
What I didn't really liked, though, was the pace. It seemed quite hectic, and frankly, I can tell this is going to be tiring to read of you keep it that way.
All in all, I see potential in that story and find it, though not masterfully written, so at least mostly enjoyable to read. I'll follow and like it.
In any case, it's nice to have another story about RD getting together with Soarin. We have far too few of them.
0_____________________________________________0 sooooooo much awkwardness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really good!
and i hope that rd and Little soarin here fall in love again
Nice job with the Neon Scratch ship. That was great that they were hanging out with Dash. Good luck with the next chapter.
Good chapter I do hope there's some more progress in the next chapter keep up the good work
Go Pinkie. I love how you put the puzzle together without any clues. Great chapter and thanks for the update.
Oh no this will not end well
Spitfire you sneaky little pony you did this just to mess with soarin didn't you
Ohh next chapter will be Exciting
This is going to be interesting!
Hmmm I have this sinking feeling that the soarindash ship is sunk
Hooray, let the Soarindash shipping continue!
ARRGG..... Dash will be Soarins first mate as he sails across the sea of love
yay! more soarindash!!!!!!!!!
5461086 Wooo Hooo!
SOARIN IS AS STUBBORN AS MEH
I never thought that Rainbow would be more mature than Soarin. Great job. I'm so happy about the update. I can't wait to read future chapters. Thanks for writing this story.
Hmmmm I don't know if rainbow will be happy or mad that soarin took scoots for training.
or maybe soarin gets scoots so fly and that makes rainbow jealous.
any one of them is a possibility.
Huh. Somehow the Wonderbolts don't know that the mane 6 saved the world... How many times now? Ah well, I can accept that. But why? Did Celestia tell them to keep it secret? If so, does anyone aside from those who live in Ponyville actually know why Twilight is a Princess? I'm confused. In a good way.
Oh, and I just noticed a spelling mistake in the summary. Nothing major, I just thought I'd point it out.
Other than that, this fic is as good as ever. Keep it up!
5476662 Well, in the show they never actually mention anything about that.... In my version they decided to keep it quiet, Twilight is just known as the Princess of friendship, not the Princess of saving Equestria
Thanks for the support, glad you're enjoying the story so far! And thanks for pointing out that typo, I hadn't noticed 
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It's no problem. I used to be a complete grammar Nazi a few years ago and would not read a story if I noticed any errors in the summary. Thankfully I am not like that anymore - I wouldn't know this piece of heaven if I was! I just thought to spare you from the wrath of other not-so-ex grammar Nazi's.
Besides, this story is so good that it would be a shame if someone denied themselves the pleasure of reading it for a minuscule mistake.
I'm eager to see what happens next!
That was a funny chapter. I loved the prank on Twilight and the statement Twilight made. When Rainbow asked if she heard that right, I went back to check. Once I saw that she heard Twilight correctly, I started laughing.
ok first of all how will rainbow react to soarin teaching scoots how to fly and succeeding on the first try.
Second twilight.......back to jail!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaat
This was awesome!!!!
loved it and hope to see more!
5531418 I can't wait for soarin dash yay
First of all first comment.
Second yes things are looking up!
Third when will the possibly awkward romance be starting agan?
5535141 Thanks for the support, it's greatly appreciated! And to answer your question... soon
Yay! This was awsome can't wait to see what happens next
Nice chapter. I admit it is funny that the cutiemark Crusaders are spreading the 'news' that Soarin and Rainbow are together. Also by telling Rarity, who knows what will happen next. I think it was funny to see Soarin get slightly jealous. Good luck with the next chapter. Thanks for the update.
This story has matured very much. Frankly the first chapter was terrible and I was very sceptical about how good this could or could not become.
But the last two/three chapters and especially this one were just wonderful!
You managed to find a much better pacing than at the beginning and to give all the characters a little bit more depth by giving them more time and elaborating their their thoughts and feelings better.
I like it and am looking forward to the next chapter
This is maturing into a really good story. The plot is very interesting and the charcter development is good as well as the way you portray your characters, can't wait for the nect chapter!
awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome
I'll look forward to your next chapter.
I love this chapter! its funny!
And im a bit excited for the next chapter it would be awesome!