While Starlight Glimmer is in Canterlot for a few days, a couple of ponies from Starlight's past arrive in Ponyville to entertain the locals but after seeing who lives there, they decide to cause problems instead.
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Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.
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my brain hurts lol
please make them go away lol
8655607
Oh they're not going to be too bad....just cause some mischief before Starlight gets home from Canterlot.....I already have plans for a way for them both to learn enough magic that they can cause serious trouble.....nothing real bad, nothing that would cause this to lose its E rating.
I really hope Trixie gets caught. It'd be funny and ironic
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Have you read "Resetting Her Destiny" and "Celestia's Protege" yet? If you haven't, it will provide insight as to why Trixie is not fond of Starlight.
Thus begins in how they get arrested.
One: tampering with goods (Flowers). That is 10 years in jail.
Two: attempted assult and manslaughter (Fluttershy). That is 10 to 15 years in jail.
Three: Destroying private property (Starlights library). That is at most 10 years in jail.
Becides stealing the books the "three strikes your out" routine is in full effect here. In total they would have to spebd 30 to 35 years in jail and pay thousands in fines.
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Actually, the library itself is government property, as is the apartment that Lyra, Minuette, Moondancer and Twinkleshine reside in. The only one of the Six that live on private property is Lemon Hearts, who resides with her Apple siblings and Granny Smith.....(her relation to them is discovered in "Closer than She Thinks" in "Starlight Glimmer and Friends")
Regarding the punishments, those are yet to be determined. I will say this though, Starlight's idea of just punishment and Celestia's will be different.
8672257
I took real life terms in looking for that.
Now I have to figure out jail time for gov property
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The jail time for government property would be worse although federal penitentiaries are a lot better than state ones are from what I understand.
I'd say.........
A year in maximum security prison with very bad criminals should do.
Granted I'm going off easy
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What they did to Moondancer certainly isn't going to help their case any.
8675441
Your right.
Two years minimum
8675490
It depends on who gets to make the decision. With Celestia, perhaps so. Given that it happened to Starlight's best friend, well she would have a much harsher punishment in mind.....one that would be seen at night.
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Hey. If Luna was still there she would've appreciated the company
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I'm not sure if Luna would want to put up with them the way their personalities are....although I'm sure it would have beat being all alone.
Okay.
Five years. Maximum security prison.
Criminal scums surrounding them every minute.
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Things are going to change, Celestia fell ill again so it will be Luna who hands down the sentences.
LOVE IT! Trixie and Sunburst being servants to the Princess. Prefect!
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I initially was simply going to have them be locked up but then having them be in servitude to the princesses crossed my mind and I decided to throw it in at the last minute and that was a literal decision with Sunburst, being Celestia's maid at the very last minute.
Wow, I feel like with Starlight and Sunburst’s history, Sunburst wouldn’t think Starlight failed them on purpose, I don’t know how Sunburst could have formed a grudge against Starlight at all, because, unlike Trixie, Sunburst uses common sense, he wouldn’t make claims without evidence, and I don’t know how Sunburst could have gotten this boastful, it doesn’t make sense to me,
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Here is the thing, Trixie was able to convince Sunburst that Starlight didn't help them as much as she could have. Given they both failed, they forged a friendship after leaving the school and given Trixie's dominant personality, it didn't take a whole lot for her to convince Sunburst that is what happened.
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Huh, feel like it would take more than that, but the story’s still good,