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QuartzScale


Someone new who decided to throw their hat into the ring.

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Interesting. Might what to brake up the chapters till around 10k. Also if you are going to cut form any sexy-times and no real gore, this is more of a teen story, which will get you more views.

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Maybe. To be fair the mature rating is more to cover my bases since the next chapter was where things get kind of heavy in gore. The only reason its tame here is because I was writing from the perspective of a child in third person when Three Suits did what he did. Also the sex tag is to cover my bases for later since I probably will not write outright clop. You can never be too careful with tags.

kanat alqisat kabir! 'ana 'uhibu tatawur alshakhsiat waltariqat alty aintaqalat bayn almshahd! wasafak jaealani saeidaan wamal 'an tafeal jyda! ta'akad min 'anak la tadae sulsatan fi alghasil!

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The story is great! I applaud the evolution of characters and the way transitions move between scenes!

I'm sorry that's about all I understand from your comment. I am glad you like it though. Only so much I can understand in that statement from arabic to english. I'm glad you enjoy how Four Suits transitions through his life and changes whether for the better or the worse. I never fully elaborated on his back story since I wanted to make sure to touch on all the points in his life where there were major changes that shaped him into who he is.

Another chapter added to this absolute gem of a story, in my opinion of course!

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Thanks. It takes a while and mysteries will always be rough to parse out effectively enough. Still I'm glad you are enjoying it and the characters that were created.

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