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I've done what I can. There are numerous typos and several mistakes I found on a casual glance but some of those mistakes are on purpose. It's all part of the mystery. I've also tried to make as many of the interactions as meaningful as possible. Suits is closest to Nightingale who he views like an Aunt. I've made Zephyr Gale as interesting as I can make a love interest and eventually there will be an arc with Sombra and Hope. It would just take a while cause I promised myself that all chapters would be at least 10 k words. No matter what.

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Good writing is never easy and the fact you've created a cast of characters that I actually feel like I could genuinely care about is great! I like where the story is going and the relationships that are there. Also I'm quite interested how Sombra is going to react....

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Yes and yes. I just don't want to hear me say how awesome I am lol. I'm not but lets not debate semantics. Anyways I'm glad you enjoyed the parts with Discord. In general I tried to think... what would Discord act like when it isn't his fate on the line. Chaos shouldn't always be so destructive but since he was an antagonist as he is seen through the eyes of the mane six and Celestia I decided to think how he would be around someone not related to Harmony or even sound of mind.

Suits is one of my favorite characters to work on. He is so dismissive and resigned to his own life that the moment he remembered that he could talk he decided to make certain everyone knew how he felt. He started out so innocent and then decided to toughen up to make sure no one underestimated him. Dare I say that even Discord respected him for being that chaotic little sh*t he was when he smashed his father's tomb even if Discord forced him to see what his father went through.

I will say Arcana Hotel is one of the hardest stories I've ever written with the most detail I could place into it. By the second chapter it hard over 27 unique characters each with their own small back stories that I haven't even gone over. This small ensemble cast each got their small spotlight but I can honestly say I would never be able to give them all justice.

And yes I am glad you at least gave me a specific answer when most people wouldn't.

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You want me to pick a favorite part? Have you even read your own story? ... The Discord parts are good and Suits general attitude is amazing overall, personally. So... Most of the story is my favorite part and I can be very picky about my favorites. Great writing BTW one of the better stories I've read, but sorry if I didn't give you the answer you wanted.

Thanks for the fave on The Arcana Hotel. Favorite part?