Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories
This story is a sequel to Rise of Equestria: The War Begins
Spike is still being controlled by the evil Zoor, and with her newfound powers she absorbed from Melodia when she was still the Alicorn Amulet, the battle for Equestria's future is going to take a real group effort. Can Twilight and her friends stop this evil and save Equestria, or will Equestria fall at the hoof of Zoor?
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Nice red and black oc.
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Just wait until later on in the story. The fight is really gonna get intense
HOLY SHOOT! That is one neat picture. Is that the new villain they're going to face? Also, it's nice to know that Rarity's actually shown a whole lot more interest in Spike
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yes, the villain in the picture is the newest villain the gang will be facing.
Thank you, Melodia! You have done what no has been able to do!
Hey you left out several other things on Spike. Such as falling into a frozen lake turned into a cube of ice andnopony helped him.
Left out of the Dessert contest, left out fo meeting Muad.
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Okay, I'll make sure I include that in the next chapter
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I know Maud Pie episode, but could you tell me the name of the other two episodes he was treated unfairly of, I want to make sure I thoroughly check every part of the chapter I'm working on.
I like Melodia and her sarcastic responses.
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No problem, it's kinda my specialty to be the sassy blunt one. 😁
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Aww thank you!
Awesome job
I can sure tell you what the REAL Ultimate Battle Royale is...
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thank you
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My chapter is almost done. And once I finish the sequel, I'm moving onto the 3rd Rise of Equestria story
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Ooooh I'm looking forward to it, give me a reason for me to be excited
OOOOOHHHHH
It’s back
Good start on the continuation from the last story, seems that everypony has their downtime from their lost spike. while the boys settle in, they have to plan out how to defeat their new threat.
The Plot thickens, a possible clues about Zoor, and worst case scenario, Zoor enslaves more dragons into her army
Like it so far, and well I guess their curiosity got the best on the two stallions in the end.
that was close from the start, and woah to the part that Enternal just point out to twilight about parts that Spike was left out from the series thinking that she and the girls were taking him for granted. I watch the show many times to know, and I know that despite how spike was just a secondary character, he did play a big role as you already know.
Im not criticize that part of the story, but I guessing that this piece of the story will be a foreshadowing to the later nor the ending of the story
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it's Eternal Flames actually
By where this is going, Spike is going nuclear bomb on Equestria, compared to the episode from Game of Thrones.
and again, their no other comments in this chapter.
This is the best chapter so far, and Melodia did much effort in the chapter than no other ponies can do in the situation. great work
Wow, with much chaos, Spike is free and normal, let alone that Rarity finally open up to him.
Excellent work
like it
good work
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what part did you like about the chapter?
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The whole confrontation and the fight against Zoor, She is powerful at every turn, that is till Eternal has possibly reveal her weakness.
The battle in this chapter got even more intense, even we thought Zoor is defeated, she pulled a nasty trick and triggers Shadow into a rampage which made it difficult.
Let see what the next chapter unfolds
Wow, this is impressive that I forgot what to say about it, all it takes is that Sunset, but all her effort to not only free and forgive clover and save Enternal, but earn the Element of forgiveness.
Truly i say, she is known as the redeemer
With this Chapter done, this is a lot better story as the last story I look into. specifically this story would have might be an addition to the show if Hasbro wants to, but that's just me though.
I be looking forward on the third story, but I have to wait till you done developing it.
Great work and brony on.
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thank you
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Hey I only picked this story series up yesterday lol
What i still cant believe is that shadow force is sombras son