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superfun
superfun #1 · Aug 18th, 2017 · · ·
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I don't know how, but that opening scene made me hate Spoiled Rich more than I already do.

And I actually applauded DT's speech in response.

I do wish the canon Spoiled Rich had the epiphanies that this version of her is having, though.

I'll admit, that didn't QUITE go the direction I was expecting, but I honestly think it worked out better.

I thought that going into this my favorite scene was going to be the sex, but instead it's the scene with Spoiled talking to herself.

I already have a sequel in mind, which would give the CMC a bit of a larger role.

Thepervertedeye
Thepervertedeye #2 · Sep 21st, 2017 · · ·
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still naked, and kissed again, before heading off to sleep.

where they supposed to anthro or human? because there pony's there always naked

TheEveryDaySparkle
TheEveryDaySparkle #3 · Sep 21st, 2017 · · ·
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8440782
I see. I must be forgot for a bit. It's ponies

Bahamuttone
Bahamuttone #4 · Oct 23rd, 2018 · · ·
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She can't believe her mother would say those terrible things

couldn't

She made her way into the forest where she knew them to always hang out. Once she got there, she knocked on the door.

It's not a forest... the CMC club is in Sweet Apple Acres orchard... so that should be orchard

Mocha Star
Mocha Star #6 · Jul 17th, 2023 · · ·
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Not bad, except near the end you keep mentioning them being newly naked. Ponies are almost always naked. Lol.

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