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Rustic_King


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... maybe edit the clipboard to remove the cock?

I think the apostrophe was the original quotation mark

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Hmm, good point! Done, can't take too many chances that someone might report even a little thing.

8330768 I agree, I don't want to see this taken down over something like that!

Well.... That happened. Likeing this and can't wait for more.

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Thanks I'll try and have it out before too long. Just have to fit it around work and other commitments - including my other ongoing story.

I really do like the picture for this story my only gripe is it doesn't have harshness (...) of Harshwinhy's face which to indicates she's an older mare in human terms to either be in her early 30s or closing in on her 40s which would explain why she says she wants a foal as she's getting on in her years which would beg the question how old is James.

I also feel that it escalated quite quickly but I did like the biological function a mare in heat does to attract Stallions.

For about the first half of the chapter, Ms. Harshwhinny is (presumably) incorrectly referred to as MRS. Harshwhinny.

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:twilightsheepish: Oh damn, you're right, Looks like I put the wrong version up! I'll fix that asap!

Great chapter can't wait for more

Can we get the source for the original coverart please?

Loved it. This was a great little tale and like with a delicious meal I wish there had been a little more but not too much more as to ruin it

– well I'm sure you know what a passionate French kiss feels like.

From humans. We do.
Also... it's Prench

Eyes on the price

Her Flanks Cutiemark. See what you did there.

'Ms. Harshwhinny, I had nae idea.

Nae? Lel Equestrian no sneaking in

'So ye thought ye'd rape me?' I replied, crossing my arms

It's not rape...

... If you ask for more.

MOOOOMM... How did you and Daddy meet?
Oh well... I raped him.

PS. Could have used more ponut action.
But it's cute and doesn't overstay it's welcome

At first I was so in shock that she was kissing me that I didn't notice her tongue writhing around like – well I'm sure you know what a passionate French kiss feels like.

All 5 dislikes were probably because of this and I'm not gunna lie, I was almost number 6.

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