i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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I like where this is going
Awesome.
6179952 how so?
6179959 we've only just begun...
6181471 i didn't want it to be too cliched with the student/teacher love/hate thing but I think the fact that its an older woman and younger male and not the vice versa compensates....for starters
Looks good so far
Do not worry I will get to the titular tutoring session soon dear readers...it's just you know the old saying variety is the spice of life
share your thoughts?
All I could say is one word for this chapter "SEXY"
6183379 who says solo acts cant be sexy?
working on getting this updated but it may be a few days, some...uncertain things going on irl rn, nothing serious or anything like that, i've just done three stories in such rapid time i think ill need a few days of to recharge my inspiration. thank you guys for being patient ill bbs asap i promise
as of this posting im 179 words into the next chapter rn
Lunasservant1985
and it is done! ....so any final thoughts? anyone?
That chapter was sweet. BTW, what does the little star means when you mentioned Lovetap? Also, would there be a sequel?
6213348 I meant to be an asterisk to indicate that love tap is the unofficial name for "button's mom" working on fixing that now, as for a sequel, one featuring her cheerilee, harshwhinny and john? hmmm..keep your hooves crossed and maybe you'll get your wish dear reader.
6213288 This was pretty awesome, I enjoyed reading it
But if it's done, why is the story still on incomplete?
6213479 ill fix it in just one sec almost forgot to change it
my bad
oh and also im really glad you enjoyed it, Ive always been a bit reluctant to do clop but setting it in the EG verse helped me get over the anxiety i've got plenty more dazzlings fics with my oc john sweetstuff in store but if you think i could pull of pony clop...ill consider doing some
6213517 It's all good and I think you can pull it off (in a non-sexual way, of course)
6213558 thanx and thanx for the follow btw
6213566 No prob
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6216827 so...how was it? what was the best bit?
6216951
absolutely perfect and very good details on the sexual stuff that's happened. Well done.
6217012 im offically to legit to stop, because you used a giff on my story commemt
This story is great. It just, well, could've been done better.
Your spelling and grammar need a big upgrade and a few pre-readers wouldn't hurt either.
If you would like help in the future, feel free to contact me.
6279960 ill keep that in mind, I do reread my work to give it an overhaul when i finish but if you see some problems just PM and im more than happy to take your editorial help.
Nice read. You somewhat captured the "do i still have it?" vibe. Some errors here and there that kinda ruined the moment (her having 16c breasts and with all the things that happened to her, as well in preserving the 'do i still have it?' theme, she should have been at least late 30s to early 40s). Sign me up as a prereader if you ever need one. Have a like.
6296736 thanks for the like and comment, i gave her a 16 c (and yes i did research cup sizes and female frame and body types for this story) because im not one for massive breasts and unrealistic fethiszed proportions,, plus the age thing..yhea i kinda think a 30 early 40 retcon is in order but idk if im ready to change the content just yet
The description says this is a sequel, but it feels more like a prequel. Is that intentional?
6450015 no its just that when i first did these fics i marked them as sequels mainly because they're like a bigger story just segmented into an episodic format. so they could follow in the order meant to read them
Not sure if the son should be "Johny be good", "Hot for teacher" or "leader of the pack"