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Dante24


I like to think I'm a great writer but I suck

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Damn didn’t expect a sequel

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I want a sequel to this sequel

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Maybe this time, Spike will finally have the balls to be dominant?

I mean, we see a hint of his overwhelmed anger near the end. Spike is NO "regular" human guy.

Maybe foreshadowing?

"Spike, there you are." came the voice of the store manager. "It's 9:45, you were supposed to be here 45 minutes ago. Why are you so late?"

Seriously though, why on earth did he ask Spike that, knowing full well who he sent him to and didn't expect him to come back alive. He truly did deserve that punch in the gut.

And as for you Spike. I know you are angry, and you have every right to be, but can you honestly say it was really that bad. I mean its clear you'd enjoyed it and had fun. Harshwhinney may be a total Karen but she's hot and sexy. No doubt you're grateful to score with a mare like her to some degree.

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Your comment reminds me that in the previous part I mentioned that Spike only survived because he kept part of his dragon heritage from his previous reincarnation :rainbowlaugh:

Now I’m wondering if there will be a part 3

Always nice to see a new Dante story.

Any plans for a part 3?

Okay now I'm beginning to think this Karen thing is some kind of foreplay for her.

That's something I'd expect from somepony like harshwhinny

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So far no, but it's not out of the question :twilightsmile:

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