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Unwhole Hole


Digging it deeper. Always deeper.

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What, no Discord tag? If the main OCs of this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

New Unwhole Whole story? Heckin' sweet.

Oh, god, this Celestia isn't one I'd like to meet.

Boy, this is an interesting group of ponies.

I've got to say, this reminds me of Warhammer 40k for some reason.

“Psh,” said Discord, waving his hand dismissively. “I dodged the attack fair and square! I won the Old War, and you lost.” He leaned back in a comfortable armchair. “That said, if I had a dried grape, it would be concerning that very reason!”

:rainbowlaugh: Looks like Discord decided to invest in some WIS and DEX this time along.

Fuck you, Twilight Sparkle.

This story is oddly enjoyable all things considered, and I found myself rooting for a few ponies that I probably shouldn't have (Sunset Shimmer). I'm incredibly interested where this story will go from this point on.

Clap clap clap.
I must applaud you you really pulled a sneaky on me, I didn't even conceive that scootaloo was her truly incredible I applaud you, I'm sorry this story is not read enough though in any case it is extremely good!

I feel pity for Luna, Celestia sounds like a royal bitch.

I don't think Rarity considers Twilight that valuable, Rainbow Dash it's too early to tell.

Oh how stupidly ironic, this is exactly the kind of perverse world Celestia is going to end up having, because every single pony besides biorobots are going to end up purged.

Uh, and yet the chicken escapes again.

Oof, the story with an open ending. It really feels like the author just give up writing it.

Even with all the Chaos, with a Capital C, going on, they still make such a cute dysfunctional pair. :yay:

Is there any shared continuity going on here?

I'm now hoping that all of your stories are Xyuka's trip through the multiverse. This sense of deep, hidden connections is exciting.

I've been wondering about the series of...I assume characters at the ends of some chapters. They all show up as black diamonds with question marks in them; broken, corrupted, or missing fonts. Are they significant to anything?

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