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Thanks for Coming In! | Retired

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Ponies have lived underground for countless years. Their ceiling of confinement is broken by six mares, each an embodiment of harmony, further fighting to allow freedom to those who dare to rise to the surface.

Then, abruptly through their rebellion, the six mares die, sacrificing themselves for a cowardice of a dragon.

The remaining resistance rebel again the Black Beast, knowing they cannot win now, unless...

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Another un-edited drivel, but maybe you'll find some enjoyment in it.

Or not, lola.

How are you shitting these out so fast

PS: I joke.

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Shit is easy to push out, especially diarrhea.

I had recently gotten writer's block and the ever-looming fear of always being a terrible writer. To break out of it, I allowed myself to write absolute garbage about the things I was feeling. I'm writing again now, and hopefully, that'll set me on the path of getting better.

Hmm, can it be that there are some errors in the category tags? There is death, war and weapons involved, maybe it should be rated [T]een and not [E]veryone. And maybe [Slice of Life] should be exchanged with [Thriller] due to the way the story is written (one of the few stories on Fimfiction.net that qualify for this category). And maybe [Princess Celestia] and [Princess Luna] should be removed. "The Princesses" are mentioned somewhere but they do not appear in the story.

Cue the obligatory music:

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Good eye. I'll make the changes now.

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Good man.

I don't know why......but I like this......for some reason

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I wonder why?

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I guess we'll never know......row row

Why isn't this marked Crossover?

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'Cause I'm lazy. FIxed now.

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Fight the power!

Another interesting story. Don't know the cross over, but this looks like it could have been the sequel to, "The Dark Cave".

Good story!:moustache:

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The crossover is gurren lagann.

So we can keep looking forward!

Oh- Damn! What was the actual Music you posted- the Video has since been deleted from Youtube... >-< I love a good story with music- and ESPECIALLY one using a Gurren Lagann Song.

TDR

A little hard to follow at times but it captured the spirit rather well.

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