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Dusty Gears


loves the show, aspiring to be a great writer and welcome to reviews

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I was running from the government at a very young age with my parents because they found something mysterious and refused to experiment on it any further. One day we were moving towns again but this time I wasn't coming, I was dropped off at the orphanage and I accepted my fate because my parents said it was the best for me but when I got there I was threatened and I defended myself with some kind of repulsion field. I ran to the garden to be away from the others until I met a voice saying he could transport me to a world where violence doesn't exist and I won't have to run anymore, I accepted and I became a dragon-like being. With my dragon-transformed dog we set out to live our lives the best we can with our abilities.

special thanks to dragon whisper 243 for the idea

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It is a good idea, however it is kinda rough and poorly written,but that is a given considering how inexperienced writer you are. I may not have written any stories myself, But I have read a lot of fics.

Comment posted by Dusty Gears deleted June 19th

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then how do I improve my writing?

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Practice. Keep writing.

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