Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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This is probably the best chapter so far and while there are many things i would like to comment about i will for now only say that i really like your characterization of Rarity, in most HiE fics Rarity is either super open and generous or she is completly disgusted by the human, but i like that in this fic she is reasonably apprehensive towards Hank, but she is still resonable and generous (heh) in thought to atleast see a another point of view. Like and fave
Not bad, a bit of a rough start which promises worse but it comes out a much better in later chapters. Will be nice to see what is to come.
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Meh, personally? I have seen so many fics in which Twilight went against the human for petty reason and those ended being amazing stories! So, yeah. Meh. I'm with you on the "All bark and no bite" thou. But, if Celestia is against him the chances of Twilight having a similar view are pretty damn high too.
P.S. I do enjoy this story, can't wait to see what the future have in store for Hank.
PS.S. Thinking about adding the other beings living in Equestria? Cause the movie kinda went ballistic on the adding of Mareponies, Anthro Cats, etc. Which all of those were things made by the fanbase and had quite the culture in the "Diaries of a madman" which is one of the best stories in the fanbase that continues being updated.
P.S.S.S. Yep, fucking love this story.
Considering the situation Hank found himself in switching the engine and tranny wouldn't be out of the question. It would be extremely logical. Also I am sure a multifuel option has been considered for situations where Diesel isn't readily available. That is something most surival stories tend to ignore or gloss over. Both gasoline and diesel tend to have issues over the long term. Diesel can jell and gas can go stale
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I'll wait and see on the movie but if you accept somehow G1 and G4 ponies are connected then anthro cats and merponies were already there just not shown in the latest version
Rarity, always the racist towards something new.
Sure. Make the white pony the racist. *ding*
Poderes de simbionte, en difinitiva se está poniendo muy interesante
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Well Hi there Miles
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Surprisingly twilight and rainbow Dash are the most racist and rarity was kinda in the middle.
Har har
Am I srsly the only one that saw this?
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I laughed a lot at that one
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Luna sat the table noisily scarfing down the delicious breakfast desert known as pancakes in front of her while she waited for her sister to return from wherever she had excused herself to.
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Desert:
A desert is a barren area of landscape where little precipitation occurs and, consequently, living conditions are hostile for plant and animal life. The lack of vegetation exposes the unprotected surface of the ground to the processes of denudation.
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Dessert:
is a course that concludes a meal. The term dessert can apply to many confections, such as biscuits, cakes, cookies, custards, gelatins, ice creams, pastries, pies, puddings, sweet soups, and tarts. The word "dessert" originated from the French word desservir, meaning "to clear the table."
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It's an honest mistake but I noticed you did this a couple times I thought you like to know.
You know Im almost [Redacted] years old now and I can say with absolute certainty that the above happens in the real world all the time.
No good deed goes unpunished. Seriously take it from someone with a lot of life experience. Never ever help people. It will always cause you horror.
The Monk
“Winona let out a bark and immediately ran up to Armor and started licking his muzzle, tail wagging like she was promised cake if she did it enough.” -Snakeskin Ducttape
OK seriously tho....
Why'd you have to make Hank dummy thiccc?
All I'm thinking about now is how is he so stealthy when the clap of his ass cheeks keep alerting the guards?
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I've explained it elsewhere, you'll just have to find those comments cause theres plenty of em, for good reason of course, and its getting changed.
fukin biiiiiitch
AMONGUS
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https://youtu.be/5DlROhT8NgU
One nitpick. I'm pretty sure the M16A4 is only burst and semi.
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You are correct, when I decided to change his m16 to full auto I failed to go through and rewrite the a4 as a3.
Hehe okay now that’s funny
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Agreed
I hate seeing the smell and taste good being a thing but I sadly can't in good nature argue about it. Cus even if you never researched it...well it simply supports it. Equines like just about everything else have a far more sensitive nose then us. As for the more uncomfortable borderline sexual part..equines like and need a fair bit of salt. Guess what has sodium? Trick question as we are talking about sweat here and why a pony might have the urge to lick you head to toe
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Horses are really bitey in my experience. Franky a lot of em are just 1200 pound assholes.
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It seems that way. There have been more than a couple of stories where the human gets fucked over by the ponies in some way after trying to help them, because they are seen as "dangerous" by those ungrateful equine idiots after showing them what they can do.
Those fuck wits don't even stop to think just how dangerous Celestia, Luna, Cadance or even Twilight can be if they ever went off the deep end. Even though in most universes Luna already went off the deep end and has already shown everybody just how dangerous she can be with the whole "Nightmare Moon" fiasco.
Even if she was being manipulated by some sort of creature, a malevolent split personality and wasn't really in control of her actions or she just went batshit insane and wasn't anywhere close to thinking clearly. She was still incredibly dangerous and could have ended up killing all life on the planet if she had succeeded in her plan of bringing about the eternal night
Nah, doesn't matter either of the three princesses or the de facto leader of the Element Bearers and Celestia's personal student are as dangerous or even more so, than the human in the story. And two of the princesses could either just hit the planet with a massive solar flare, or just ram the sun or moon into it and then kill every living thing on the planet if they wanted to.
The other Princess could use her magic to put almost anyone she wanted under a sort of mind control spell similar to Chrysalis and turn them into her slaves or the other pony could just friggin' straight up vaporize any poor idiot that got on her nerves. Though they all seem to just get a pass because they are ponies, but the human gets thrown under the damned bus if he even seems the slightest bit dangerous, because they aren't an equine and are human instead.
In stories such as those I say screw all those racist ass ponies and that they all deserve whatever they get from whatever monster or "big bad" comes tearing through Equestria. And if the human gets seriously screwed over and ends up turning on them because of it, then I say they deserved it and brought it upon themselves.
They were all so terrified of the human turning on them, they tried to prevent that from ever happening and they only ended up creating a "self fulfilling prophecy" in their attempt.
Probably due to the fact humans have a bad sense of smell