Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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I know your getting burned out on this story,
But if Hank doesn't demand her crown for this, I'm finding your house and burning your toilet paper. 😎
Ładnie
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Dziękuję
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If the mail man can't find my house I don't know how well you could lol.
Freebird is a great song for a fight. Case in point: Kingsman church fight scene.
Damn what a blood pumping chapter!
And who's to say Celestia wouldn't like being called a Bitch by Hank, huh? Seems like something she'd secretly be into
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Exactly. It's fuckin mint.
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Well I mean mayyyyybe in a different circumstance. Plus they don't really like each other all too well yet.
GOD DAMN, I have never read a fight this good. It's so descriptive and well paced. I could imaging everything that was happening. Very well done mate.
Actually, can you recommend me any stories with similar action styles as yours, I literally can't find anything that remotely comes close to the quality of your figth scenes. Any recommendation of stories you enjoy.
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I would if I could man but to be honest I haven't really read any stories since I started mine. And I'm really glad you like it. It was a lot of work. Quite a lot of the moves I write I actually choreograph myself to make sure they work and to get a better understanding of how to describe them. Makes me look absolutely retarded from an outsiders perspective probably but I genuinely enjoy acting out the scenes I write and vice versa.
If I do think of any stories I really enjoyed I'll get back to you as well. Thanks again for the kind remarks.
All I could think off was doom and the rip ant tear ost from the game.
Toad indeed. Perfect for frodges in Frogshwitz.
And isn't calling Princess Sour Cream a bitch is strange, because Diamond dogs exists?
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Naw, she understood what he meant. I mean female dogs exist in our world and the word bitch still has ots slang meaning.
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Huh... If MC is Scottish - I imagine he has a lot more swears in his vocabulary.
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Indeed
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"Celestia, ya twat, get yer overgrown ass here roight now or so help me - I am going to punch ye so hard that sun on yer ass cheek will be eclipsed!"
I really don't think Hank's phone going all apeshit as it did was either an accident or coincidence. It seems as if the occurrence was more along the lines of something or someone who was both intangible and invisible, playing around with his phone to see how it worked and to find a specific song on it.
What really made that a possibility in my mind, was the way "Freebird" was rewound along with how the song seemed to just play out of thin air while Hank was laying on the phone to try and silence it. It was if someone was actually doing all of that on purpose and it wasn't just his phone glitching out or something.
If I had to guess who was being a giant douche canoe and trying to get Hank, Celestia and Luna killed by giving away their presence and position to the Shucks with that music. Then I would say it was either Discord somehow (even when he was still sealed away in some stories he retained a limited capacity to affect the world around him), or that asshole werewolf who was the mastermind behind the Shucks.
Speaking of the Lord Of Chaos, I could see the whole thing with both Hank and the Shucks actually causing enough Chaos to potentially free Discord, rather than it actually happening as it did in the show.
I'd really like to see just how Hank would go about dealing with that Chaotic ass clown.
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Regarding discord: you shall see.
That music playing by itself without a speaker is bad news.