Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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For Hank I imagine a deep baritone voice that doesn't show emotion too well. He's also from the midwest and as you know has Scottish and Irish parents, so a whole mess of weird accents.
For Clover I'd have to say Eastern U.S. And he is from Filly delphia so that whole deal.
Hope this cleared some stuff up for you. :)
Thank you for using my idea.
an errand*
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you made this mistake twice.
Those were what really stuck out enough for me to mention.
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No problemo it was a great one, I thank you for suggesting it.
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Thank you I will get on those.
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That's a relief. The last story I read that did that was a l4d2 crossover with Ellis in pony land. It got dark in a way that was no fun to read and so I stopped reading it. At least with the creepypasta type of dark the world will keep going, but Ellis literally brought the apocalypse.
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Yeah I've read stories that take that route, and while some like it, I certainly don't. There's still gonna be plenty of fighting but I'm not going to have infected show up in equestria and start killing off ponies while Hank has to fight the infected again.
I guess that "nanomachines" bacteria (you know, because of the inexplicable regeneration that should be impossible because cell quality gets worse as dna degrades through repeated cell devision. Also, the cells that directly cause nerve impulses when stimulated by vibrations don't replicate themselves after the organ is fully formed.) might flush that virus out. Also, if his senses, and by extension cell quality and dna "durability", are getting better, wouldn't he not age and live until killed?
The organ I'm talking about is your cochlea btw
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That could be possible over time and touching on the fact of the symbiotic bacteria in his body now I haven't really decided, he can still die from blood loss, for example if a main artery is cut or burst, also if a major organ is punctured or critically damaged and any physical way. Trauma in general can get him, he's not like dead pool or anything.
That being said he won't be getting any cold or flus, and other sicknesses of the sort. The bacteria does indeed speed healing and coagulation while making repairs to it's host too ensure it's own survival and it may extend Hanks life and slow aging to a point, but grandfather time will still eventually claim him as well. I don't believe it would make sense, not that it does now, for the bacteria to have the ability to completely stop telomere degradation that would be even more hard to believe than it is now.
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It's a magic bacteria though. The --how-- it does that is explained by saying "magic" and doing jazz hands. It's shown effects would indicate it has solved aging for your protagonist, though. And in theory the effect would last until the bacteria evolves enough to lose it's regenerative properties.
I wasn't even thinking about the injury healing.
I was just going off the fact that it can heal parts of him that can only degrade.
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I get how it makes sense for him to be biologically immortal like a lobster, but for the bacteria to mess with telomeres it would have to do things at the chromosomal level. You bring up some good points and have made me reconsider a few things but for the time being the bacteria just as a immune system boost and speeds healing while preventing infection, not stopping infection, but preventing it.
This all may change in the future when I do some more research on aging and things on the cellular level, and even though magic jazz hands is a common excuse in these stories I would prefer to go at it with some thought and try to make sense of it all.
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That's cool. To me Princess Luna is "best pone" so I like to read stories where the protagonist gets immunity to old age. It helps with the scourge that is shipping if one of the shipped won't outlast the other.
I am grinning right now. Thanks for acknowledging the reality and writing this in there. I assume it was for my benefit and I thank you, good sir. Also, BOWS ROCK! I was a three time student state champion competition shooter in Traditional Instinctive style archery.
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You made some insightful points, I even went as far to put a little, un loaded of course, 22 in my boot for a few hours while around the house. It was very uncomfortable and did indeed irritate the sensitive skin of the ankle.
And thank you for the feed back on every chapter so far, feedback helps me more than you know.
Also Three time student state champion? Damn. I only shoot in my free time with a old compound I have, I want to get a recurve though. I feel like it will be more satisfying to hit targets unassisted by pulleys and sights.
8542707 My first recurve was a LUCKY break. It was a custom job that somebody else never pocked up so I was able to snag it for just under $400.00
This is definitely one of the best fics I've seen on this site.
Makes me happy
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Don't know about 'the best' but I really appreciate the compliment. I'm glad you've liked what ever you've read so far.
Whaaaat he did to a rock?
Kinked it.
How?!
No idea, seriously, no idea. It still looks like a rock, but every time you look at it the only thing you can think is "oh, kinky!"
Wave is supposed to be have
But be careful due to how powerful the bow is it has a incredible draw weight.”
Taking a arrow out of the quiver and standing up I place the arrow on top of my hand holding the bow and pull back with three fingers back to my right cheek.
“Or you can just pull it back like it’s nothing.”
This small bit on text contradicts the whole gravity theory. Bows simply are not effected by gravity. They work off tension so a 200 pound draw bow will ALWAYS be a 200 pound draw. Even in the vacuum of space this will not change. So either this is a subtle hint that more is going on behind the curtain or...you slipped up and this is a plot hole that you shouldn't have drawn attention to
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It's not a plot hole.
*in fluttershy head*
“And pretty hot too and your body”
I know I should but come on you know you were thinking it too
I agree on that
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This comment was also related.to something else that had me thinkin ealier especcially with hanks long shots with the rifle. If the gravity really was lower then bullet drop would also be somthing that would need to be refactored in this world too.
I had wondered if this had been intentional or mistaken physics on behalf of the writer.
I thought maybe he would have a portion of the reward transferred to Fluttershy for a present, the Apple family to prepay for apples, and the town / school / library’s accounts for discretionary spending. Seemed like a way to accept it without accepting it as appears to be MC’s wont.